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Some people prefer to travel alone. Others like to travel in groups. Which do you think is the best way to travel?

Some people prefer to travel alone. Others like to travel in groups. Which do you think is the best way to travel? RJJM
of course, traveling is a very enjoyable activity. There is a category of people who prefers to travel alone, others prefer to travel with friends. Of course, both have their advantages. Traveling alone is my preference. To start with, when you travel alone, it is more adventurous and enjoyable. In my opinion, when you travel, you should get to know other people's culture and I think traveling alone is the best way for it.
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, it is more adventurous and enjoyable. In my opinion, when you
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, you should
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IELTS essay Some people prefer to travel alone. Others like to travel in groups. Which do you think is the best way to travel?

Essay
  American English
2 paragraphs
74 words
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 6.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 6.0
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