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Some people believe that nowadays we have too many choices. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement

A number of individuals argue that at present there are lots of options to choose from. While in my opinion, it is true that multiplied options are available at the moment, there are a number of limitations are also have to face. Having a number of alternatives we are able to select the best one for ourselves. These choices include technologies, travels, educations, daily life, films, books. At present, there are lots of smartphones, laptops, computer games, software tools available. if we select travels there are plenty of alternatives like buses, electric trains, planes, private cars, ships and so on. In addition, the number of courses is increasing day-by-day in every educational institution, pupils are able to learn according to their superior. The number of products that are needed in daily lives is growing fast. In the modern world technological enhancement lead to rose science fiction films, improved graphics quality also would have to offer. people interested in books like the real-life stories of famous persons, science fiction, magazines. On the other hand, plenty of options also make people confused and they are struggling to select which alternatives are the best for them. The variation in choosing sometimes breaking the relationship between loved ones and also one of the main reasons for division among friends. In conclusion, I must agree that nowadays we have plenty of alternatives to select, In contrast, we have to be aware of selecting the best option in every aspect of life due to the fact that it gives us a better future.
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of individuals argue that at present there are lots of
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options
to choose from. While in my opinion, it is true that multiplied
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options
are available at the moment, there are a
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number
of limitations are
also
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to face. Having a
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number
of
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alternatives
we are able to
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select
the best one for ourselves. These choices include technologies, travels, educations, daily life, films, books. At present, there are lots of smartphones, laptops, computer games, software tools available.
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if
we
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select
travels there are
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plenty
of
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alternatives
like buses, electric trains,
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planes
, private cars, ships and
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on.
In addition
, the
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number
of courses is increasing day-by-day in every educational institution, pupils are able to learn according to their superior. The
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number
of products that
are needed
in daily
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lives
is growing
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fast
. In the modern world technological enhancement lead to rose science fiction films,
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improved
graphics quality
also
would
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have to
offer.
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people
interested in books like the real-life stories of
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famous
persons, science fiction, magazines.
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,
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plenty
of
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options
also
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make
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people
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confused and
they are struggling to
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select
which
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alternatives
are the best for them. The variation in choosing
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sometimes
breaking the relationship between
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loved
ones and
also
one of the main reasons for division among friends.
In conclusion
, I
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must
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agree
that nowadays we have
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plenty
of
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alternatives
to
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select
,
In contrast
, we
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have to
be aware of selecting the best
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option
in every aspect of life due to the fact that it gives us a better future.
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IELTS essay Some people believe that nowadays we have too many choices. with this statement

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
257 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.0
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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