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Some people believe that nowadays we have too many choices. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement ?

Some people believe that nowadays we have too many choices. with this statement? 8lDG
It has been observed that many people accept that these days we have much choices to a major extent. I firmly balrter with the viewpoint. my preference is elabarated further. The foremost argument to explaine my opinion is that every where many thing can buy in much choices. To elabarated, In these days many shopping malls and generall shops owners keep choices. For example, These days many people are buy clothes of different pattern color as well as brands. moreover, some academic institute on choice available at the time. By this I mean, children are also choose anyone school, colleges and university, which is affortable them. such as many people goal of study in university. They have been completing her goal. Furthermore, students are freedom about them filed. In the other words, students are choose field of they like most. This is more crucial part of students as well as necessary part for publis. Apart from this, many company has suggest options for them employees. company managers are creates some options through employees after emplayees are choose them option, they should feeling of happiness. Nevertheless some may counter claim that many options are not benefits for students. These are more options available in students life; However they do confuse on the options. To cap it all, it impact on the people, Which are buy somethig in market. They can not choose any thing on the fixed time. Therefore they can not stay at home dicided time. All in all, it is stated that at the we have too much choice in everywhere. This time people are buy different thing and students are choose them field on freedom, but it is confusion create on people. I believe that it is play vital role in people life and it has more advantages.
It has
been observed
that
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many
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people
accept that these days we have
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much
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choices
to a major extent. I
firmly
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balrter
with the viewpoint.
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my
preference is
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elabarated
further
. The foremost argument to
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explaine
my opinion is that
Did you mean "everywhere"?
every where
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many thing
can
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buy
in
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much
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choices
. To
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elabarated
, In these days
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many
shopping malls and
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generall
shops owners
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keep
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choices
.
For example
, These days
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many
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people
are
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buy
clothes of
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different
pattern color
as well
as brands.
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moreover
,
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some
academic institute on
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choice
available at the
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time
. By this I mean, children are
also
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choose
anyone
The pronoun 'anyone' is usually used with a third-person or a past tense verb: "schools", "schooled".
school
, colleges and university, which is
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affortable
them.
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such
as
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many
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people
goal of study in university. They have been completing her goal.
Furthermore
,
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students
are freedom about them filed. In the other words,
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students
are
Consider using a past participle here: "chosen".
choose
field of they like most. This is more crucial part of
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students
as well
as necessary part for
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publis
. Apart from this,
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many
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company
has
Use past participle here: "suggested".
suggest
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options
for them employees.
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company
managers are creates
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some
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options
through employees after
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emplayees
are
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choose
them
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option
, they should
The verb 'should' requires the base form of the verb: "feel"
feeling
of happiness.
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Nevertheless
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some
may
This word is normally spelled with hyphen.
counter claim
that
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many
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options
are not benefits for
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students
. These are more
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options
available in
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students
life;
However
they do confuse on the
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options
. To cap it all, it
Did you mean "impacts"?
impact
on the
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people
, Which are
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buy
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somethig
in market. They can not
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choose
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any thing
on the
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fixed
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time
.
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Therefore
they can not stay at home
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dicided
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time
. All in all, it
is stated
that at
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the we
have too much
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choice
in everywhere. This
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time
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people
are
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buy
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different
thing and
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students
are
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choose
them field on freedom,
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but
it is confusion create on
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people
. I believe that it is play vital role in
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
people
life and it has more advantages.
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IELTS essay Some people believe that nowadays we have too many choices. with this statement?

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
300 words
5.5
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