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Some people believe that nowadays we have too many choices. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

Some people believe that nowadays we have too many choices. with this statement? 7arb2
In 20 1st century here people half of the world agree with that presently here are lots of opportunity in this Morden time. This things increase country rank in development field. In my opinion, in these days we have a lot of things that we can choose, but better opportunity only available in developed countries. For example America, UK, Japan and also China and also with the increasing demand or services of scientific things. I believe every people can be any types of risky works if they want to do it from their heart with craziness. Every kind of works can be possible in this 21st century time period. It is more easier to be settle in your life rather than in your grand parents time. These two things depends upon each other. Development country and opportunity are depends upon yourselves. In conclusion, at the moment in these days there is good career in social media and lots of younger boys and girls are making vlogs like traveling, eating foods in different hotels and after that post it in youtube. This work is on trending in current situation.
In 20 1st century here
people
half of the world
agree
with that
presently
here are lots of opportunity in this
Morden
time.
This
things increase country rank in development field.

In my opinion, in these days we have
a lot of
things that we can choose,
but
better opportunity
only
available in
developed countries
.
For example
America, UK, Japan and
also
China and
also
with the increasing demand or services of scientific things. I believe every
people
can be any types of risky works if they want to do it from their heart with craziness. Every kind of works can be possible in this 21st century time period. It is
more easier
to be
settle
in your life
rather
than in your grand parents time. These two things depends upon each other. Development country and opportunity are depends upon yourselves.

In conclusion
, at the moment in these days there is
good
career in social media and lots of younger boys and girls are making vlogs like traveling, eating foods in
different
hotels and after that post it in
youtube
. This work is on trending in
current
situation.
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IELTS essay Some people believe that nowadays we have too many choices. with this statement?

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3 paragraphs
188 words
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