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Some people believe that more strict laws should be made for handling the crimes that are happening daily while others simply believe that the way these things are being handled nowadays is proving to be extremely effective and is helping different nations in the same.

Some people believe that more strict laws should be made for handling the crimes that are happening daily while others simply believe that the way these things are being handled nowadays is proving to be extremely effective and is helping different nations in the same. Q2K93
several people believed if we applied a more strict law the crime handling would be easier. In my opinion, a proper rule should be made for each crime of the culprit In my point of view, In every country, there are the various rules for punishing the guilt but I believed certain crimes like rapists should be given heavier punishment should be given like death sentence or lifetime jail with lots of burdens because in India every day somewhere in the corner rape cases are been happening and the culprit are freely roaming around because not strong government if we have a
several
people
believed if we applied a more strict law the crime handling would be easier. In my opinion, a proper
rule
should
be made
for each crime of the culprit In my point of view, In every country, there are the various
rules
for punishing the guilt
but
I believed certain crimes like rapists should be
given
heavier punishment should be
given
like death sentence or lifetime jail with lots of burdens
because
in India every day somewhere in the corner rape cases
are been
happening and the culprit are
freely
roaming around
because
not strong
government
if we have
a
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IELTS essay Some people believe that more strict laws should be made for handling the crimes that are happening daily while others simply believe that the way these things are being handled nowadays is proving to be extremely effective and is helping different nations in the same.

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101 words
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