Search
Vocabularying
Listening
Reading
1. Academic
2. General
Writing
1. IELTSWriting Checker
2. IELTS Writing Samples
Speaking

Do you want to improve your writing? Try our new evaluation service and get detailed feedback.

Some people believe that modern architecture has made cities more attractive in the last century.To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Some people believe that modern architecture has made cities more attractive in the last century. yRkmP

In some regions around the world it is believed that modern architecture has benefited cities of making them more attractive in the last century. I believe that modern architecture had a massive impact on cities regarding the attractiveness. Through the building of modern architecture more tourists abroad can be attracted to visit modern cities. With modern architecture international tourists can be convinced to visit a modern city due to the innovative infrastructure, plenty of opportunities from a business point of view. In addition to that modern architectures can offer tourists an enormous choices of activities within the city. For instance tourists have got the opportunity to do sight-seeing since the performance of infrastructure of a modern city is high. Also the building of modern architecture helps the city visually to change the appearance of it as old and ruined buildings can be changed in their appearance. Owing to the fact that cities do not benefit at all if old and ruined buildings do not bring any value for the city is better to build new. With the help of modern architecture the economy of a city can be increased because it brings enormous value for the city. The city can definitely benefit from a economic standpoint from it since cities with modern architectures and appearance nowadays tend to profit from it. For example you can see it in Dubai. Dubai was a desert city back then however transformed into a famous international city nowadays owing to modern architecture. In conclusion it is to be said that city can profit heavily of modern architecture from a economic point of view.

In This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
 regions around the world it is believed
 that You use this word too often, consider replacing it withstate-of-the-artcontemporarycurrentstylishpresent-daymodernized
modern
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withbuildingengineeringconstructionplanning
architecture
 has benefited You use this word too often, consider replacing it withmetropoliscentermunicipalitydowntownplacecapital
cities
 of making them more attractive in the last century. I believe that You use this word too often, consider replacing it withstate-of-the-artcontemporarycurrentstylishpresent-daymodernized
modern
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withbuildingengineeringconstructionplanning
architecture
 had a massive impact on You use this word too often, consider replacing it withmetropoliscentermunicipalitydowntownplacecapital
cities
 regarding the attractiveness.

Through the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withhuthouseconstructionarchitecturehome
building
 of You use this word too often, consider replacing it withstate-of-the-artcontemporarycurrentstylishpresent-daymodernized
modern
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withbuildingengineeringconstructionplanning
architecture
 more You use this word too often, consider replacing it withvisitorsightseertraveler
tourists
 abroad can be attracted
 to visit You use this word too often, consider replacing it withstate-of-the-artcontemporarycurrentstylishpresent-daymodernized
modern
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withmetropoliscentermunicipalitydowntownplacecapital
cities
. With You use this word too often, consider replacing it withstate-of-the-artcontemporarycurrentstylishpresent-daymodernized
modern
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withbuildingengineeringconstructionplanning
architecture
 international You use this word too often, consider replacing it withvisitorsightseertraveler
tourists
 can be convinced
 to visit a You use this word too often, consider replacing it withstate-of-the-artcontemporarycurrentstylishpresent-daymodernized
modern
 city due to the innovative infrastructure, This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:abundance
plenty
 of opportunities from a business point of view. In addition
 to that You use this word too often, consider replacing it withstate-of-the-artcontemporarycurrentstylishpresent-daymodernized
modern
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withbuildingengineeringconstructionplanning
architectures
 can offer You use this word too often, consider replacing it withvisitorsightseertraveler
tourists
 an enormous Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean "choice"?choice
choices
 of activities within the city. For instance
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withvisitorsightseertraveler
tourists
 have This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquired
got
 the opportunity to do sight-seeing since the performance of infrastructure of a You use this word too often, consider replacing it withstate-of-the-artcontemporarycurrentstylishpresent-daymodernized
modern
 city is high.

Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?Also,
Also
 the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withhuthouseconstructionarchitecturehome
building
 of You use this word too often, consider replacing it withstate-of-the-artcontemporarycurrentstylishpresent-daymodernized
modern
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withbuildingengineeringconstructionplanning
architecture
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :assists
helps
 the city visually
 to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :alteradjust
change
 the appearance of it as This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:ancientagedmature
old
 and ruined You use this word too often, consider replacing it withhuthouseconstructionarchitecturehome
buildings
 can be This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :alteredadjusted
changed
 in their appearance. Owing to the fact that You use this word too often, consider replacing it withmetropoliscentermunicipalitydowntownplacecapital
cities
 do not benefit at all if This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:ancientagedmature
old
 and ruined You use this word too often, consider replacing it withhuthouseconstructionarchitecturehome
buildings
 do not bring any value for the city is better to build new. With the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :assistassistance
help
 of You use this word too often, consider replacing it withstate-of-the-artcontemporarycurrentstylishpresent-daymodernized
modern
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withbuildingengineeringconstructionplanning
architecture
 the economy of a city can be increased
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:due to the factin light of the fact thatowing to the fact that
because
 it brings enormous value for the city. The city can definitely benefit from Use "an" instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'an
a
 economic standpoint from it since You use this word too often, consider replacing it withmetropoliscentermunicipalitydowntownplacecapital
cities
 with You use this word too often, consider replacing it withstate-of-the-artcontemporarycurrentstylishpresent-daymodernized
modern
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withbuildingengineeringconstructionplanning
architectures
 and appearance nowadays tend to profit from it. For The comma is probably missing here: "example, you".example, you
example you
 can This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :witness
see
 it in Dubai. Dubai was a desert city back then however
 transformed into a This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:well-known
famous
 international city nowadays owing to You use this word too often, consider replacing it withstate-of-the-artcontemporarycurrentstylishpresent-daymodernized
modern
 architecture.

In The comma is probably missing here: "conclusion, it".conclusion, it
conclusion it
 is to be said
 that city can profit heavily
 of You use this word too often, consider replacing it withstate-of-the-artcontemporarycurrentstylishpresent-daymodernized
modern
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withbuildingengineeringconstructionplanning
architecture
 from Use "an" instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'an
a
 economic point of view. 