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In many countries much public and private money is being spent on space exploration. is this a good way to spent money?

In many countries much public and private money is being spent on space exploration. is this a good way to spent money? D25ra
A number of countries either public or private sector suppose to invested their money on space investment. In this essay I will argue which will be most effective and communicate my notion. there are several main reason why most of public or private sector prefer to spent their money on space investment instead of another bussinesses. firstly, A wide range of bussinesses are available naowadays, people may wonder which will be most effective to invest money. Eventually to gain more provit with the type of investment. Etiher public money or private one. this activities are going to happen due to the fact that, this type of investment will be most beneficial rather than others. I tend to agree with this opinion. Owing to the fact that in this kind of investment people just need to find which the location they want to be deal. Moreover, if they can find the best place to investment they can continue to negosiate than start to invest their money on it. Nevertheless this type of investment are not going to same all around the world. Its depend on bussiness area. Sometime they can not find the place well-known. to conclude, most of people prefer to invest their money but the location is a superb crucial to defined their activities. and most importantly that strategies is the essential to doing thid.
A number of countries either public or private sector suppose to invested their
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money
on space
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investment
. In this essay I will argue which will be most effective and communicate my notion.
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there
are several main reason why
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most of public
or private sector prefer to spent their
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money
on space
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investment
instead
of another
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bussinesses
.
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firstly
, A wide range of
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bussinesses
are available
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naowadays
,
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people
may wonder which will be most effective to invest
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money
.
Eventually
to gain more
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provit
with the type of
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investment
.
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Etiher
public
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money
or private one.
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this
activities are going to happen due to the fact that, this type of
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investment
will be most beneficial
rather
than others. I tend to
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agree
with this opinion. Owing to the fact that in this kind of
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investment
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people
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just
need to find which the location they want to be
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deal
.
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, if they can find the best place to
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investment
they can continue to
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negosiate
than
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start
to invest their
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money
on it.
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Nevertheless
this type of
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investment
are not going to same all around the world. Its depend on
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bussiness
area. Sometime they can not find the place well-known.
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to
conclude, most of
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people
prefer to invest their
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money
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but
the location is a superb crucial to defined their activities.
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and
most
importantly
that strategies is the essential to doing
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thid
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IELTS essay In many countries much public and private money is being spent on space exploration. is this a good way to spent money?

Essay
  American English
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226 words
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