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Some people believe that it is good to share as much information as possible in scientific research, business and the academic world. Others believe that some information is too important or too valuable to be shared freely. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Sharing as much information as possible in scientific research or other fields in the world might be good, but some people believe that these data are too significant to be shared without restrictions. In my opinion, information should be shared freely in the world but it also depends on the data type and impacts after sharing. To distribute data freely means that you can have access to any knowledge or info and use that info for your own or to improve yourself. If none of the data is shared, then further research would not exist and we would not know the details of the knowledge as the prerequisite data was unknown. Moreover, sometimes third people involved in that issue also need to know about those like citizens who should be informed about the scientific research of diseases or that the investors have to know the company background and its performance before investing in it. On the other hand, it is understandable that some data can impact the company or the organization badly. For example, if the data concerns company management and their competitive advantage once the competitors know, copy and modify, this might lead the company to disaster. Other than this is when the data collection was from a significant amount of cost and cannot be shared freely as they might loss. From these two points of views, it is reasonable to share info for educational and further research while keeping some confidentiality to protect the company from getting losses.

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research
 or other fields in the world might be This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :beneficialproduct
good
, This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
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some
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people
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data
 are too significant to be You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcommunalcommonmutual
shared
 without restrictions. In my opinion, information should be You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcommunalcommonmutual
shared
freely
 in the world This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
 it also
 depends on the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withpicturestatisticsknowledgedossierevidencegoods
data
 type and impacts after sharing.

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data
freely
 means that you can have access to any knowledge or info and This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exploit
use
 that info for your This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :possess
own
 or to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :ameliorate
improve
 yourself. If none of the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withpicturestatisticsknowledgedossierevidencegoods
data
 is You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcommunalcommonmutual
shared
, then further
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research
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exist and
 we would not You use this word too often, consider replacing it withnoticerecognizeappreciateperceiveexperiencesee
know
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details
 of the knowledge as the prerequisite You use this word too often, consider replacing it withpicturestatisticsknowledgedossierevidencegoods
data
 was unknown. Moreover
, This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :in some instances
sometimes
 third This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
people
 involved in that issue also
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 about those like citizens who should be informed
 about the scientific You use this word too often, consider replacing it withprobeinquiryinvestigationexplorationanalysis
research
 of diseases or that the investors This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:ought to
have to
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know
 the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withgroupclubcommunityteampartyassociation
company
 background and its performance This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:previouslyprior to
before
 investing in it.

On the other hand
, it is understandable that This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
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data
 can impact the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withgroupclubcommunityteampartyassociation
company
 or the organization badly
. For example
, if the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withpicturestatisticsknowledgedossierevidencegoods
data
 concerns You use this word too often, consider replacing it withgroupclubcommunityteampartyassociation
company
 management and their competitive advantage once the competitors You use this word too often, consider replacing it withnoticerecognizeappreciateperceiveexperiencesee
know
, copy and modify, this might lead the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withgroupclubcommunityteampartyassociation
company
 to disaster. Other than this is when the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withpicturestatisticsknowledgedossierevidencegoods
data
 collection was from a significant amount of cost and cannot be You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcommunalcommonmutual
shared
freely
 as they might “loss” is a noun. Did you mean the verb “lose” (= ‘to lose’)?lose
loss
.

From these two points of views, it is reasonable to share info for educational and further
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withprobeinquiryinvestigationexplorationanalysis
research
 while keeping This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
 confidentiality to protect the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withgroupclubcommunityteampartyassociation
company
 from getting losses. 