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Some people believe that it is essential to keep everything at their proper place in home and offices should be kept neat.

Some people believe that it is essential to keep everything at their proper place in home and offices should be kept neat. 7En5
Some people believe that it is essential to keep everything at their proper place in home and offices should be kept neat. I strongly agree with the point and this essay im going to discuss why it is very important to have every arranged and in order at offices and homes. Firstly, the main reason why tidiness can affect people's behavior and mood; Many events or accidents may change an individual condition, but you will feel calm and relaxtion if you have a comfortable and tidy house. Furthermore, Your friends and visitors your home will have a good first impression if they see how many effort that you spend on this house to keep it clean all the time. According to a recent survey that people tend to have a positive attidude will have more chances to be successful in their work and life. Moreover, keeping your house tidy can also save your time to clean dirty items which you could spent your free time with your family. Secondly, when all of the items can arranged in order which can assist your work to be more effective and productive. Instead of looking for the items that you need, you can find it in the place where its belong. Leaving tools and files not in order may cause a serious injury and damge your job; For intance, leaving a dangerous tools on the floor may lead someone to a serious damage. In conclusion, It is very nessesary to keep everything neat and tidy in your home and workplace in order to save your time and help you easy to find whenever we want.
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people
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an individual condition,
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you will feel calm and
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relaxtion
if you have a comfortable and tidy
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.
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first
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that you spend on this
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will have more chances to be successful in their work and life.
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tidy can
also
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to clean dirty items which you could
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your free
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with your family.

Secondly
, when
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all of the
items can arranged in
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order
which can assist your work to be more effective and productive.
Instead
of looking for the items that you need, you can find it in the place where its belong. Leaving tools and files not in
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order
may cause a serious injury and
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damge
your job; For
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intance
, leaving a
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tools
on the floor may lead someone to
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a serious damage
.

In conclusion
, It is
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nessesary
to
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keep
everything neat and tidy in your home and workplace in
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order
to save your
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and
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you easy to find whenever we want.
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IELTS essay Some people believe that it is essential to keep everything at their proper place in home and offices should be kept neat.

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
272 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.0
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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