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some people believe that it is best to accept a bad situation others argue to try to improve it

some people believe that it is best to accept a bad situation others argue to try to improve it o19Nb

Accepting such situation can be a best solution for many individuals, such as an undesirable job or poor finances. On the other side some people believe that it is better to try and improve such situation In this essay will discuss both sides and opinion as well. Firstly, people try to avoid taking actions to solve their problem but they simply accept it because they are unable to do so or they don’t want to take any risk. For instance, A student gets poor grades in science subject teacher gave him 1 low mark by mistake rather than asking to teacher to correct it he accept that low mark as motivation for further examination. So that is the example of pessimism When talk about optimistic people they try to overcome such bad situation such as lack of money For example, rather than being so anxious about it or sleeping at road sides they try to improve it by doing some extra work as a part time income they will be able to pay taxes, bills and some other personal expenses. And they live debt free. Problem can be solve by taking the step. In my opinion, every problem requires different actions according to problem if the situation can be handle by accept it just leave it or if the problem requires some efforts so just do so. By way of conclusion, I am going to restate my position people should handle their problem as it requires we should make decision wisely.

Accepting such situation can be Use "the" with the superlative.the
a
 best solution for This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a plethora ofa number ofnumerous
many
 individuals, such as an undesirable job or poor finances. On the other side This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcrowdfamilycommunitynationsocietypublic
people
 believe that it is better to "Try and" is common in colloquial speech, but "try to" is recommended for writing.try to
try and
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :ameliorate
improve
 such situation

In this essay will discuss both sides and opinion as well
.

Firstly
, You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcrowdfamilycommunitynationsocietypublic
people
 try to avoid taking actions to solve their You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcomplicationdilemmaquestionobstacletroubledispute
problem
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
 they simply
 accept it This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:due to the factin light of the fact thatowing to the fact that
because
 they are unable to do Use a comma before 'or' if it connects two independent clauses (unless they are closely connected and short).so, or
so or
 they don’t want to take any This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :hazarddanger
risk
. For instance
, A student This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquires
gets
 poor grades in science subject teacher gave him 1 low mark by mistake rather
 than This is a collocation error. You do not need a preposition after 'asking'. Remove it: "asking".asking
asking to
 teacher to correct it he The pronoun 'he' is usually used with a third-person or a past tense verb: "accepts", "accepted".acceptsaccepted
accept
 that low mark as motivation for further
 examination. This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
So
that is
 the example of Please add a punctuation mark at the end of paragraphpessimism.pessimism!pessimism?pessimism:pessimism,pessimism;
pessimism


When talk about optimistic You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcrowdfamilycommunitynationsocietypublic
people
 they try to overcome such This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :evil
bad
 situation such as lack of money

For example
, rather
 than being This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
 anxious about it or sleeping at road sides they try to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :ameliorate
improve
 it by doing This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
 extra work as a This word is normally spelled with hyphen.part-time
part time
 income they will be able to pay taxes, bills and This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
 other personal expenses. And they This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :reside
live
 debt free. You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcomplicationdilemmaquestionobstacletroubledispute
Problem
 can be Consider using the past participle "solved"?solved
solve
 by taking the step.

In my opinion, every You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcomplicationdilemmaquestionobstacletroubledispute
problem
 requires This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:various
different
 actions according to You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcomplicationdilemmaquestionobstacletroubledispute
problem
 if the situation can be Consider using a past participle here: "handled".handled
handle
 by accept it This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:merely
just
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :depart
leave
 it or if the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcomplicationdilemmaquestionobstacletroubledispute
problem
 requires This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
 efforts This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:merely
just
 do This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
.

By way of conclusion, I am going to restate my position You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcrowdfamilycommunitynationsocietypublic
people
 should handle their You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcomplicationdilemmaquestionobstacletroubledispute
problem
 as it requires we should This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :createconstructmanufactureproduce
make
 decision wisely
. 