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Some people believe that eventually all jobs will be done by artificially intelligent robots.

It is becoming more credulous that all jobs will be carried out by artificially intelligent robots. Robots can do some of the tasks, but it is unlikely to say that they will do all of the jobs. This essay will discuss why robots are restricted to fewer jobs. It is likely that jobs that do not need high level of creativity and convoluted functioning will be substituted by robots. There are companies that will choose robots because they have tasks that can't require high cerebral thinking, rather they require men who will do work as the owner tell them. These companies will choose robots. For instance, in companies like car making the owner will make model in front of robots and tell them to do what he or she just did. In addition, they will not stop until we can't tell them to stop. For these reasons, jobs that fall under this category will be replaced by robots. On the other hand, it is over-weighted to say that all occupations will be achieved by robots. These are jobs in which human touch is mandatory. Like in sociology, psychology, medical industry people will never put trust in robots. Furthermore, there are some jobs in which human to human interaction is needed. So, robots will never get a place in sectors like i described above. Artificially intelligent robots are taking places in most of the human employed jobs. Less skilled jobs will be done by robots; however, there are occupations in which robots are not reliable. In my opinion, it is totally uncredulous to say robots will end human occupations.
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out by
artificially
intelligent robots. Robots can do
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some of the
tasks,
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but
it is unlikely to say that they will do
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all of the
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jobs
. This essay will discuss why robots
are restricted
to fewer
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jobs
. It is likely that
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jobs
that do not need high level of creativity and convoluted functioning will
be substituted
by robots. There are
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companies
that will choose robots
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because
they have tasks that can't require high cerebral thinking,
rather
they require
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men
who will do work as the owner
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tell
them. These
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companies
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, in
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companies
like car making the owner will
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make
model in front of robots and
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tell
them to do what he or she
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until we can't
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stop
. For these reasons,
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jobs
that fall under this category will
be replaced
by robots.
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, it is over-weighted to say that all occupations will
be achieved
by robots. These are
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jobs
in which
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human
touch is mandatory. Like in sociology, psychology, medical industry
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people
will never put trust in robots.
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, there are
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jobs
in which
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to
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human
interaction
is needed
.
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So
, robots will never
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get
a place in sectors like
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i
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described
above.
Artificially
intelligent robots are taking places in most of the
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human
employed
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jobs
. Less skilled
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jobs
will
be done
by robots;
however
, there are occupations in which robots are not reliable. In my opinion, it is
totally
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end
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IELTS essay Some people believe that eventually all jobs will be done by artificially intelligent robots.

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
268 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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