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It is more important to have a good family than to have friends. Family can always compensate for absence of friendship. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

There is a heated between those who dictate the importance of the family and others who support friendship as extreme cogent. However, both have cogent points. In my opinion, I argue both groups as important to our life. Starting with the first perspective. In our life we cannot avoid members from our family such as parents as well as siblings. There are always there to console and to help us in various difficult situations even though in some instances we do not value them or sometimes embarrass us. In my experience, I would rather employ and trust my relative to my business rather a pal, because with kinsmen I feel more secured. He will hesitate to weaken a business strength, and will be honest. In addition to this, I have a friend who hired his best buddy in his shop. Later, his chum double crossed him and run with huge monies. Therefore, I am sure that family has more value than chum. Despite of the first opinion, I think that friends cannot isolated also we need them immensely. When it becomes to whom to tell a deep secret, others prefer to align with a close person other than a kindred. They consider that the one who are responsible for their downfalls generally are their relatives, consequently they prefer to avoid family members in their important life cycle so that they achieve certain issues in their struggles. Similarly, I usually opt a friend to intimate by deep secret. In conclusion, we need family as we want friends. Both of them are intensively needed in our life and are dependable each other.
There is a heated between those
who
dictate the importance of the
family
and others
who
support friendship as extreme cogent.
However
, both have cogent points. In my opinion, I argue both groups as
important
to our life.

Starting with the
first
perspective. In our life we cannot avoid members from our
family
such as parents
as well
as siblings. There are always there to console and to
help
us in various difficult situations
even though
in
some
instances we do not value them or
sometimes
embarrass us. In my experience, I would
rather
employ and trust my relative to my business
rather
a pal,
because
with kinsmen I feel more secured. He will hesitate to weaken a business strength, and will be honest.
In addition
to this, I have a
friend
who
hired his best buddy in his shop. Later, his chum double crossed him and run with huge monies.
Therefore
, I am sure that
family
has more value than chum.

Despite of
the
first
opinion, I
think
that
friends
cannot
isolated
also
we need them
immensely
. When it becomes to whom to
tell
a deep secret, others prefer to align with a close person
other
than a kindred. They consider that the one
who
are responsible for their downfalls
generally
are their relatives,
consequently
they prefer to avoid
family
members in their
important
life cycle
so
that they achieve certain issues in their struggles.
Similarly
, I
usually
opt a
friend
to intimate by deep secret.

In conclusion
, we need
family
as we want
friends
. Both of them are
intensively
needed in our life and are dependable each
other
.
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IELTS essay It is more important to have a good family than to have friends. Family can always compensate for absence of friendship.

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  American English
4 paragraphs
270 words
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