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Some people believe that eventually all jobs will be done by artificially intelligent robots. What is your opinions? v.7

Some people believe that eventually all jobs will be done by artificially intelligent robots. What is your opinions? v. 7
These days, human are being progressively replaced by artificial intelligent robots in the workshop. Thought it was possible that all the physicals, unskilled works will require a machine, it is impossible to perform work those deals with precise skilled and human feelings. This essay will demonstrate only minor labours will be performed by the humans Eventually, all the works that do not need any specific knowledge, but only require labour will be mechanized by the android. Many factories and companies believed that if those menial jobs are denied by the automatic machine, it could save both time and money rather than spending upon hiring, training and employing human. In restaurants in Nepal, for instance, many waiters and cashiers have been replaced by artificial machines that consume less money. Furthermore, those artificial robots can perform duties all day and night without any rest and salary, so that human labour will be changed with robotic intelligence, if only it doesn't need any sort of skilled to perform toil. On the contrary, there are certain jobs that can't be replaced by robots because man-made robots can never reach into the real human's brain. In a simple way, to do such as doctor, medicines and social work, ones must have both skilled and emotions, which is absent in artificial robots. Unless, those works are not done by skilled human, it cannot be satisfied. Hence, robots will never be able to achieve those skills of human which has existed in human's brain. Highly sophisticated, complex works will always need human skills, however the unskilled tasks will be done by robots. For these reasons only few chores will be available for human in today's world. It is most likely that the machines will continue its employment by replacing human in most tasks.
These days,
human
are being
progressively
replaced by artificial intelligent robots in the workshop.
Thought
it was possible that all the physicals, unskilled works will require a
machine
, it is impossible to perform
work
those deals with precise
skilled
and
human
feelings. This essay will demonstrate
only
minor
labours
will
be performed
by the
humans


Eventually
, all the works that do not need any specific knowledge,
but
only
require
labour
will
be mechanized
by the android.

Many
factories and
companies
believed that if those menial jobs
are denied
by the automatic
machine
, it could save both time and money
rather
than spending upon hiring, training and employing
human
. In restaurants in Nepal,
for instance
,
many
waiters and cashiers have
been replaced
by artificial
machines
that consume less money.
Furthermore
, those artificial robots can perform duties all day and night without any rest and salary,
so
that
human
labour
will be
changed
with robotic intelligence, if
only
it doesn't need any sort of
skilled
to perform toil.

On the contrary
, there are certain jobs that can't
be replaced
by robots
because
man
-made robots can never reach into the real human's brain.
In a simple way
, to do such as doctor, medicines and social
work
, ones
must
have both
skilled
and emotions, which is absent in artificial robots. Unless, those works are not done by
skilled
human
, it cannot
be satisfied
.
Hence
, robots will never be able to achieve those
skills
of
human
which has existed in human's brain.

Highly
sophisticated, complex works will always need
human
skills
,
however
the unskilled tasks will
be done
by robots. For these reasons
only
few chores will be available for
human
in
today
's world. It is most likely that the
machines
will continue its employment by replacing
human
in most tasks.
6Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
23Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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IELTS essay Some people believe that eventually all jobs will be done by artificially intelligent robots. What is your opinions? v. 7

Essay
  American English
5 paragraphs
296 words
6.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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