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Some people believe that eventually all jobs will be done by artificially intelligent robots. What is your opinion? v.5

Some people believe that eventually all jobs will be done by artificially intelligent robots. What is your opinion? v. 5
Nowadays, artificially intelligent robots are progressively taking over the workforce of a human being. In my opinion, it is possible that menial jobs should be done by robots while other jobs should be taken by people. This essay will discuss why eventually very few jobs are carried out by humans rather than robots. Firstly, Robots should be eventually carried out most of the jobs which does not require specific and complex human skills. Many companies are concerned with artificial intelligence because it is far better than recruiting, training and employing human. In some weaving factories in India, for example, many workers are replaced by automated weaving machines that cost less than employees. In addition, these automated machine works round the clock and require no holidays. For these reasons jobs which need of artificial intelligence will be carried out by robots. To be more specific, there are some human jobs that cannot be replaced because robots will never achieve the capacity to do them. Put simply, some jobs only require a human touch. For instance, these jobs include education, psychology, medicine and social work to name but a few which cannot be done by robots. These significant reasons will show how specific and complex human skill is needed. To conclude, In this contemporary world, a significant number of jobs are performed by artificially intelligent robots. Unskilled jobs are eventually done by robots, however the jobs that require sophisticated human skills will always exist. Ultimately a very less number of jobs will be safer under the workforce of robots.
Nowadays,
artificially
intelligent robots are
progressively
taking over the workforce of a
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human
being. In my opinion, it is possible that menial
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jobs
should
be done
by robots while other
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jobs
should
be taken
by
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people
. This essay will discuss why
eventually
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very
few
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jobs
are carried
out by
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humans
rather
than robots.

Firstly
, Robots should be
eventually
carried out most of the
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jobs
which does not
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require
specific and complex
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human
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skills
.
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Many
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companies
are concerned
with artificial intelligence
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because
it is far better than recruiting, training and employing
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human
. In
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some
weaving factories in India,
for example
,
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many
workers
are replaced
by automated weaving machines that cost less than employees.
In addition
, these automated machine works round the clock and
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require
no holidays. For these reasons
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jobs
which need of artificial intelligence will
be carried
out by robots.

To be more specific, there are
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some
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human
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jobs
that cannot
be replaced
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because
robots will never achieve the capacity to do them. Put
simply
,
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some
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jobs
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only
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require
a
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human
touch.
For instance
, these
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jobs
include education, psychology, medicine and social work to name
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but
a few which cannot
be done
by robots. These significant reasons will
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show
how specific and complex
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human
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skill
is needed
.

To conclude
, In this contemporary world, a significant number of
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jobs
are performed
by
artificially
intelligent robots. Unskilled
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jobs
are
eventually
done by robots,
however
the
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jobs
that
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require
sophisticated
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human
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skills
will always exist.
Ultimately
a
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very
less number of
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jobs
will be safer under the workforce of robots.
8Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
24Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
0Mistakes

IELTS essay Some people believe that eventually all jobs will be done by artificially intelligent robots. What is your opinion? v. 5

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
257 words
6.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 7.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
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