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Some people believe that eventually all jobs will be done by artificially intelligent robots. What is your opinion

Some people believe that eventually all jobs will be done by artificially intelligent robots. What is your opinion 2oxA
Owing to the tremendous technological achievements that are occurring nowadays especially in the artificial intelligence field, many individuals totally believe that humans will be replaced by robots in all types of workforces. In my opinion, it is possible that only menial occupations can be overtaken by robots, while those which require human and creative thinking cannot be done by robots. This essay will discuss why most of jobs can be carried out by robots and why others are difficult to be. Actually, robots can substitute humans in most jobs particularly those which do not need skills. The artificially intelligent machines are more precise, accurate and faster than human labors and work 24 hours without any breaks. Thus more professional and productive work could be produced in less time. For instance, occupations that contain fine details such as embroidered carpentry wood and jobs that are typically step by step process like manufacturing are easily to be carried out by those machines as they do not require human- brain thinking. In fact, nowadays it can be seen that many factories are hiring intelligent robots rather than employees due to these reasons. However, only few jobs that are entirely depending on human creative skills are not able to be overtaken by those artificial brains. Simply those brains do not have human skills such as thinking, designing, solving problems, managerial skills. For example, we have never heard about a machine that made a new discovery in any scientific field or designed a building, also there are no robots hired as a manager to any company. Additionally, they are not capable of generating ideas or solve problems that need critical thinking. This is why we are still in a badly need to human brains in some occupations. To conclude, there is no doubt that robots make people’s life easier and faster and now they replace many employees in many jobs to enhance production process, but we could not deny the vital role of human’s brain in some occupations that impossible to be substituted by artificial brain.
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workforces
. In my opinion, it is possible that
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only
menial occupations can
be overtaken
by robots, while those which require
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human
and creative
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thinking
cannot
be done
by robots. This essay will discuss why most of
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jobs
can
be carried
out by robots and why others are difficult to be.

Actually, robots can substitute
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humans
in most
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jobs
particularly
those which do not need
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skills
. The
artificially
intelligent machines are more precise, accurate and faster than
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human
labors and work 24 hours without any breaks.
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Thus
more professional and productive work could
be produced
in less time.
For instance
, occupations that contain fine
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details
such as embroidered carpentry wood and
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jobs
that are
typically
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step by step
process like manufacturing are
easily
to
be carried
out by those machines as they do not require
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brain
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. In fact, nowadays it can be
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seen
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factories are hiring intelligent robots
rather
than employees due to these reasons.

However
,
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few
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jobs
that are
entirely
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human
creative
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skills
are not able to
be overtaken
by those artificial
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brains
.
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those
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brains
do not have
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human
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skills
such as
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thinking
, designing, solving problems, managerial
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skills
.
For example
, we have never heard about a machine that made a new discovery in any scientific field or designed a building,
also
there are no robots hired as a manager to any
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company
.
Additionally
, they are not capable of generating
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ideas
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thinking
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still
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to
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To conclude
, there is no doubt that robots
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make
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people
’s life easier and faster and
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they replace
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employees in
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jobs
to enhance production process,
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we could not deny the vital role of
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human’s
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by artificial
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brain
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IELTS essay Some people believe that eventually all jobs will be done by artificially intelligent robots. What is your opinion

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