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1. How has globalization influenced your country?

1. How has globalization influenced your country? wKbeN
First of all I will talk about the merits. Owing to Globalization, we are receptive many economic and scientific achievements all over the world, impulses modernization and state-of-the-art technology, expand the market, attract numerous investment resources, enhance the knowledge level of citizens and the living standards, open a large number of employment opportunities, exchanges between various cultures On the other hand, globalization also brings out disadvantages. To begin with environmental contamination such as pollution of air, water, depletion of natural resources, greenhouse gasses, trigger the spread of disease. Several foreign investors influx in resulting in increase of competition, loss of market. Furthermore, there is the appearance of workshop, society work with the low environment and salary, be exploited with the poor usages
First of all
I will talk about the merits. Owing to Globalization, we are receptive
many
economic and scientific achievements all over the world, impulses modernization and state-of-the-art technology, expand the market, attract numerous investment resources, enhance the knowledge level of citizens and the living standards, open
a large number of
employment opportunities, exchanges between various
cultures


On the other hand
, globalization
also
brings out disadvantages. To
begin
with environmental contamination such as pollution of air, water, depletion of natural resources, greenhouse gasses, trigger the spread of disease. Several foreign
investors
influx
in resulting in
increase of competition, loss of market.
Furthermore
, there is the appearance of workshop, society work with the low environment and salary,
be exploited
with the poor usages
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IELTS essay 1. How has globalization influenced your country?

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