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1. How has globalization influenced your country?

1. How has globalization influenced your country? wKbeN

First of all I will talk about the merits. Owing to Globalization, we are receptive many economic and scientific achievements all over the world, impulses modernization and state-of-the-art technology, expand the market, attract numerous investment resources, enhance the knowledge level of citizens and the living standards, open a large number of employment opportunities, exchanges between various cultures On the other hand, globalization also brings out disadvantages. To begin with environmental contamination such as pollution of air, water, depletion of natural resources, greenhouse gasses, trigger the spread of disease. Several foreign investors influx in resulting in increase of competition, loss of market. Furthermore, there is the appearance of workshop, society work with the low environment and salary, be exploited with the poor usages

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