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Some people believe that companies should manufacture products that last for a long time. Others feel that the emphasis should be placed on producing goods that are cheap. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Some people believe that companies should manufacture products that last for a long time. Others feel that the emphasis should be placed on producing goods that are cheap. l2NJ
Nowadays their is a great controversy on supporting the kind of products, weather to use product that last for long period of time or practice cheap goods so that it is affordable to every one. In this essay, I will emphasis on both the point of views and discuss why I support that the companies should manufacture goods that last for a long time. Moreover, people believe that long lasting product has fewer or negligible disadvantages as compared to low cost goods. Firstly, It is an one time investment which can be lived long. The long lasting products helps in retailing the value of product by long period of usage. Secondly, such products can be considered as reliable and has low maintenance over period of time. For example, community are more likely to purchase the quality furniture which has low maintenance and would last long till life time. On other hand, number of people are more inclined towards the cheaper or economical products, the reason is not able to afford the expensive goods. Still their is a large number of folks which comes under the poverty line and approach towards the low cost goods, however it has its own disadvantages such as low quality, less reliable and short life. China products are one of the example of it, whereas many companies are building the same product as those but with good quality and long life. In conclusion, it is more reliable to invest more at one time on any product which could last long rather than purchasing the goods year after year on regular basis. This practice could waste more money than one time investment.
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is a great controversy on supporting the kind of
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products
, weather to
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use
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product
that last for
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long
period of
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time
or practice
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cheap
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goods
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that it is affordable to every one. In this essay, I will
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emphasis
on both the point of views and discuss why I support that the
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companies
should manufacture
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goods
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long lasting
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product
has fewer or negligible disadvantages as compared to
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low
cost
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goods
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investment which can be
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. The
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long lasting
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products
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maintenance over period of
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time
.
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, community are more likely to
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purchase
the quality furniture which has
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maintenance and would last
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till
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are more inclined towards the cheaper or economical
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, the reason is not able to afford the expensive
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goods
.
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folks which
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it has its
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disadvantages such as
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quality, less reliable and short life. China
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are one of the example of it, whereas
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companies
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quality and
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on any
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product
which could last
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rather
than purchasing the
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goods
year after year on regular basis. This practice could waste more money than one
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time
investment.
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IELTS essay Some people believe that companies should manufacture products that last for a long time. Others feel that the emphasis should be placed on producing goods that are cheap.

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275 words
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