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some people believe that children should not start learning a foreign language at early age do you agree or not

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People are split on the need for young people learning a second language at an early age. While this could bring many benefits and drawbacks, I believe that the advantages are far more than the disadvantages. First of all being less self-conscious and shy, youngsters feel free to make mistakes while learning and in this way they easily pick up the right pronunciation. If the timetable allow more frequent yet shorter sessions for maintaining learner’s enthusiasm and progress, I believe it is a great stage for absorbing an other language. In addition, the ability of speaking multiple languages nowadays is a practical knowledge to have. it assists with chances of receiving higher education abroad and better job opportunities in the future. In conclusion, surely there are people who still believe that acquiring a foreign language is not a necessity for young children, yet I think the benefits outweigh the drawbacks
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People
are split
on the need for young
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people
learning a second language at an early age. While this could bring
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many
benefits and drawbacks, I believe that the advantages are far more than the disadvantages.

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First of all
being less self-conscious and shy, youngsters feel free to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
make
mistakes while learning and in this way they
easily
pick up the right pronunciation. If the timetable
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
allow
more frequent
yet
shorter sessions for maintaining learner’s enthusiasm and progress, I believe it is a great stage for absorbing
This word is normally spelled as one.
an other
language.

In addition
, the ability of speaking multiple languages nowadays is
Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply "practical knowledge".
a practical knowledge
to have.
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it
assists with chances of receiving higher education abroad and better job opportunities in the future.

In conclusion
,
surely
there are
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people
who
still
believe that acquiring a foreign language is not a necessity for young children,
yet
I
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think
the benefits outweigh the drawbacks

IELTS essay some people believe that children should not start learning a foreign language at early age do you agree or not

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
149 words
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