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Some people believe that capital punishment should not be used. Others, however, argue that it should be allowed for the most serious crimes. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Some people believe that capital punishment should not be used. Others, however, argue that it should be allowed for the most serious crimes. RN2mQ
Few people think that the death penalty should be utilised. Others defend that it must be permitted for most severe crimes. In my point of view I believe that alowing capital punishment in most serious crimes can create fear who tends to commit any misdeed. Some of them trust that declaring death sentance must be avoided completely even in crucial cases. In the cases like robbery, self defence announcing extreme penalty is not the right judgement. As robbery can be crime can be punished by prisoning a person in the jail for a particular time period because it is not that severe as a muder, where as self defence does not come under crime because a person in the process of protecting himself may murder the opposite one. For example if a guy tries to rape a girl and in order to save herself she may commit muder to attempt which was happened accidentally. So death is not suitable justice for all offence. In contrast, using capital punishment in significant wrongdoing makes criminals panic to attempt crimes. Declaration of extreme death penality makes decrease in trails of murder and serious misdeeds. When an individual attacks others and become a cause for there deaths due some personal issues in between them, if the culprit is not punished with severe punishment there are chances to repeat this mistake again. For example terrorists attack a country and kill several humans, they plant bombs in crowdy areas and blast which leads to loss of many families in such situation to those terrorists hanging out is the correct justice, as because of them many lives were gone. To conclude, using capital punishment in small crimes not necessary but in critical violation is mandatory.
Few
people
think
that the death penalty should be
utilised
. Others defend that it
must
be permitted
for most severe
crimes
. In my point of view I believe that
alowing
capital
punishment
in most serious
crimes
can create fear who tends to commit any misdeed.

Some
of them trust that declaring death
sentance
must
be avoided
completely even in crucial cases. In the cases like robbery,
self defence
announcing extreme penalty is not the right judgement. As robbery can be
crime
can
be punished
by
prisoning
a person in the jail for a particular time period
because
it is not that severe as a
muder
,
where as
self defence
does not
come
under
crime
because
a person in the process of protecting himself may murder the opposite one.
For example
if a guy tries to rape a girl and in order to save herself she may commit
muder
to attempt which
was happened
accidentally
.
So
death is not suitable justice for all
offence
.

In contrast
, using capital
punishment
in significant wrongdoing
makes
criminals panic to attempt
crimes
. Declaration of extreme death
penality
makes
decrease in trails of murder and serious misdeeds. When an individual attacks others and become a cause for there deaths due
some
personal issues in between them, if the culprit is not punished with severe
punishment
there are chances to repeat this mistake again.
For example
terrorists attack a country and kill several humans, they plant bombs in
crowdy
areas and blast which leads to loss of
many
families in such situation to those terrorists hanging out is the correct justice, as
because
of them
many
lives
were gone
.

To conclude
, using capital
punishment
in
small
crimes
not necessary
but
in critical violation is mandatory.
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IELTS essay Some people believe that capital punishment should not be used. Others, however, argue that it should be allowed for the most serious crimes.

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