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Some people believe that bicycle are the best mode of transport in the cities Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of using bicycle

Some people believe that bicycle are the best mode of transport in the cities Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of using bicycle a76Oo
Irrefutably, there is no denying that vehicles play part and parcel role in people's life to travel at different places. Some people opine that cycles are the best mean of transportation. T firmly agree to the notion and this essay has both merits and demitrits, further details will be discussed in subsequent paragraphs. To commence with the first school of thought, bicycles are more beneficial source of transport. It has ample of reasons. The rearmost coherent factor to be considered which cannot be neglected is pollution free. To illustrate it, cycles are the pollution free vehicle, there is no requirement of fossil fuels in the usage of bicycles. Furthermore, cycle are really cheapest transport, whereas other transport are expensive. For instance, individuals have to pay more money to purchase automotive vehicles. After that, bicycles help people to stay fit. On the other hand, the public in general tends to distinguish that bicycles has numerous of disadvantages. The foremost, its takes a plethora of time. People cannot save their time. Another rationale is poor lights. To explain it, bicycles do not have light facilities. For example, individuals have to face problem during the mights, as well as it can travel a limited distance. In recapitulation, everything has their own significance, nothing can be ignored. Nevertheless, cycles take innumerable time yet it is a cheapest and pollution free source of transport. Consequently, i firmly agree to the statement.
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people
's life to travel at
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different
places.
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Some
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people
opine that
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cycles
are the best mean of transportation. T
firmly
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agree
to the notion and this essay has both merits and
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demitrits
,
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details
will
be discussed
in subsequent paragraphs. To commence with the
first
school of
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thought
,
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bicycles
are more beneficial source of
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transport
. It has ample of reasons. The rearmost coherent factor to
be considered
which cannot
be neglected
is pollution free. To illustrate it,
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cycles
are the pollution free vehicle, there is no requirement of fossil fuels in the usage of
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bicycles
.
Furthermore
,
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cycle
are
really
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cheapest
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transport
, whereas other
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transport
are expensive.
For instance
, individuals
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have to
pay more money to
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purchase
automotive vehicles. After that,
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bicycles
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help
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people
to stay fit.

On the other hand
, the public
in general
tends to distinguish that
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bicycles
has numerous of disadvantages. The foremost, its takes a plethora of time.
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People
cannot save their time. Another rationale is poor lights. To
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explain
it,
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bicycles
do not have light facilities.
For example
, individuals
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have to
face problem during the
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mights
,
as well
as it can travel a limited distance.

In recapitulation, everything has their
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own
significance, nothing can be
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ignored
.
Nevertheless
,
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cycles
take innumerable time
yet
it is
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a
cheapest and pollution free source of
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transport
.
Consequently
,
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i
firmly
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agree
to the statement.
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IELTS essay Some people believe that bicycle are the best mode of transport in the cities Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of using bicycle

Essay
  American English
3 paragraphs
236 words
This writing has been penalized,
text can't be
less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1
5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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