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Some people believe that access to internet is necessary to live full life. Give your opinion ?

Many group of individuals believe that, internet is the basic requirement for living a full life. I will stand with the given statement. My opinion regarding to this will be justified in the ensuring paragraph. There are myraid of advantages we get from internet. First of all, it is basic requirement in our daily life. As, it is the way that can be used to communicate with other individuals easily. Also, we get face to face calling through it so, individual can experience real life feelings. Communication with internal family members as well as external family members can be done easily without facing any difficulties. To exemplify, instagram l, snapchat, whatsapp and all social media app is the best way to communicate with anyone. Secondly, acquirement of knowledge and online studies can not be fulfilled without the help of interest. To sum up l, individuals gets knowledge by reading daily life news on internet. So, he/she will get to know about the present situation and get help through it. Furthermore, online studies is the beneficial fot the students. And, they easily connected to it. Also, they can easily study at home or anywhere. And it is beneficial for the students who cannot afford to visits school for some reasons. For instance, in this pandemic situation not a single student will he able to go school therefore online classes is the best way to educate them. In conclusion, internet is needed in daily life as has many merits and also best way to get educated and help individuals in many ways.
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group of
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individuals
believe that, internet is the basic requirement for living a full
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life
. I will stand with the
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given
statement. My opinion
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regarding to
this will
be justified
in the ensuring paragraph.

There are
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myraid
of advantages we
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get
from internet.
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First of all
, it
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is basic
requirement in our daily
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life
.
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As
, it is the way that can be
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used
to communicate with other
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individuals
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easily
.
Also
, we
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get
face to face calling through it
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so
,
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individual
can experience real
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life
feelings. Communication with internal family members
as well
as external family members can
be done
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easily
without facing any difficulties. To exemplify,
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instagram
l,
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snapchat
,
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whatsapp
and all social media app is the best way to communicate with anyone.

Secondly
, acquirement of knowledge and online studies can not
be fulfilled
without the
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help
of interest. To sum up l,
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individuals
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gets
knowledge by reading daily
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life
news on internet.
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So
, he/she will
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get
to know about the present situation and
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get
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help
through it.
Furthermore
, online studies
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is
the beneficial
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fot
the students. And, they
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easily
connected to it.
Also
, they can
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easily
study at home or anywhere. And it is beneficial for the students who cannot afford to
The verb after “to” should be in the base form: “visit”.
visits
school for
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some
reasons.
For instance
, in this pandemic situation not a single student will
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he
able to go school
therefore
online classes is the best way to educate them.

In conclusion
, internet
is needed
in daily
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life
as has
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many
merits and
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also best
way to
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get
educated and
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help
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individuals
in
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many
ways.
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IELTS essay Some people believe that access to internet is necessary to live full life. Give your opinion?

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
260 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
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Lexical Resource: 5.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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