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Some people believe positive thinking has benifits, while others consider it has drawbacks.

Some people believe positive thinking has benifits, while others consider it has drawbacks. PX0JK
Many citizens believe bright thinking has many kind of pres and on the others reoples consume it has. Magetive side. This essay will shows both of sides positive and as well as nagetive. In the modern era, People believe in thinking and some others believing in Positive dull side they believe bright thinking has some drawbacks. . Nowadays, youngsters believing in that such as they consider a bright thinking has more positive. sides. However, behind the times people did not believe in benefits. Positive thinking gives good vibes such as lots of citizens are thinking a patitive side on they gets a very knowledge about bright thinking they have sucess future by good thinking. Moreover, people have set of mind about Positive think and their advantage. People saying a quote about success think don't worry be positive. On the nagitive side people believing Sucess thinking has a mary In the present, people kinds of draw backs.
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IELTS essay Some people believe positive thinking has benifits, while others consider it has drawbacks.

Essay
  American English
3 paragraphs
156 words
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