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Some people belie that eventually all jobs will be done by artificially intelligent robots. What is your opinions? v.3

Some people belie that eventually all jobs will be done by artificially intelligent robots. What is your opinions? v. 3
These days, human are being progressively replaced by artificial intelligent robots in workshop. Athought it is possible that all the physical, unskilled works will required machine, it is impossible to perform work that deals with precise skilled and human feelings. This essay will demonstrates only minor work will be perform by human being. Eventually, all the works that does not need any specific knowledge but only require labour will be mechanized by the robots. Many factories and companies believed that if those menial jobs are dine by automatic machine, it could save both time and money rather than spending upon hiring, training and employing human. In restaurants in nepal, for instance, many waiter and cashier have being replaced by artificial machines that consume less money. Futhermore, those artificial robots can work all day and night without any rest and salary, so that human labour will be changed with robotic intelligence, if only it doesn' t need any sort of skilled to perform work. On the contrary, there are certain jobs that can not be replaced by robots because manmade robots can never reach to real human' s brain. In simple way, to do such as doctor, medicines and social work, ones must have both skilled and emotions, which is absence in artificial robots. Unless, those works are not done by skilled human, it cannot be satisfied. Hence robots will never be able to achieve those skills of human which are exist in human' s brain. Highly sophisticated, complex works will always need human skills, however unskilled will eventually completed by robots. For these reason only few workwill be available for human in today' s world. it is most likely that machine will continued its employment by replacing human in most
These days,
human
are being
progressively
replaced by artificial intelligent robots in workshop.
Athought
it is possible that all the physical, unskilled works will required
machine
, it is impossible to perform
work
that deals with precise
skilled
and
human
feelings. This essay will
demonstrates
only
minor
work
will be
perform
by
human
being.

Eventually
, all the works that does not need any specific knowledge
but
only
require
labour
will
be mechanized
by the robots.

Many
factories and
companies
believed that if those menial jobs are
dine
by automatic
machine
, it could save both time and money
rather
than spending upon hiring, training and employing
human
. In restaurants in
nepal
,
for instance
,
many waiter
and cashier have
being replaced
by artificial
machines
that consume less money.
Futhermore
, those artificial robots can
work
all day and night without any rest and salary,
so
that
human
labour
will be
changed
with robotic intelligence, if
only
it
doesn&
#039; t need any sort of
skilled
to perform work.

On the contrary
, there are certain jobs that can not
be replaced
by robots
because
manmade
robots can never reach to real
human&
#039; s brain. In simple way, to do such as doctor, medicines and social
work
, ones
must
have both
skilled
and emotions, which is absence in artificial robots. Unless, those works are not done by
skilled
human
, it cannot
be satisfied
.
Hence
robots will never be able to achieve those
skills
of
human
which are
exist
in
human&
#039; s brain.

Highly
sophisticated, complex works will always need
human
skills
,
however
unskilled will
eventually
completed
by robots. For these reason
only
few
workwill
be available for
human
in
today&
#039; s world.
it
is most likely that
machine
will
continued
its employment by replacing
human
in
most
5Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
28Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
21Mistakes
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IELTS essay Some people belie that eventually all jobs will be done by artificially intelligent robots. What is your opinions? v. 3

Essay
  American English
5 paragraphs
289 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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