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Some people argue that capital punishment is good for a country. To what extent do you agree or disagree?"

Death penalty is one of the methods to punish a person in a number of countries. Numerous people believe that capital punishment is inhuman and bad for a country, while others think that it is a good way. I consider that death penalty is marvelous method to punish humans who made criminal offense. Firstly, capital punishment helps government to solve problem of crimes and robbery. Increasing of criminal level always have a crucial effect for the country’s policy, therefore introducing death penalty will help to deal with it. However, not all offenders need to have a capital punishment, for instance, person who broke human rights by killing another person will have death penalty, on the contrary if person only make a tiny robbery, this human will not have a capital punishment. All depends on how hard criminal offense was. Secondly, person who was at situation which connected to violence or rape will live with calm and psychological stability, if human who did these actions will have a death penalty. In other words, person who had crucial situations which accorded to the crimes, will live a happy life without thoughts that one day rapist will come to them. Nevertheless, there is no guaranty that victim will regenerate a psychological stability, due to the fact all people have various reactions after these situations. To sum up, I suppose that capital punishment is one of the best ways to punish persons who made violation of laws and as I mentioned earlier, death penalty depends on hardness of criminal offense.
Death
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is one of the methods to punish a
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person
in a number of countries. Numerous
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people
believe that
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capital
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punishment
is inhuman and
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bad
for a country, while others
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think
that it is a
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good
way. I consider that death
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penalty
is marvelous method to punish
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humans
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who
made
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criminal
offense.

Firstly
,
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capital
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punishment
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helps
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government
to solve problem of crimes and robbery. Increasing of
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criminal
level always have a crucial effect for the country’s policy,
therefore
introducing death
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penalty
will
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help
to deal with it.
However
, not all offenders need to have a
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capital
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punishment
,
for instance
,
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person
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who
broke
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human
rights by killing another
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person
will have death
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penalty
,
on the contrary
if
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person
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only
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make
a tiny robbery, this
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human
will not have a
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capital
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punishment
. All depends on how
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hard
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criminal
offense was.

Secondly
,
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person
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who
was at situation which connected to violence or rape will
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live
with calm and psychological stability, if
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human
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who
did these actions will have a death
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penalty
.
In other words
,
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person
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who
had crucial situations which accorded to the crimes, will
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live
a happy life without thoughts that one day rapist will
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come
to them.
Nevertheless
, there is no guaranty that victim will regenerate a psychological stability, due to the fact all
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people
have various reactions after these situations.

To sum up, I suppose that
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capital
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punishment
is one of the best ways to punish
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persons
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who
made violation of laws and as I mentioned earlier, death
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penalty
depends on hardness of
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criminal
offense.
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IELTS essay Some people argue that capital punishment is good for a country. "

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
256 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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