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Some people are of the view that only university education can ensure success, whereas many others oppose the view. Discuss both the views and give your opinion.

Some people are of the view that only university education can ensure success, whereas many others oppose the view. VxlQ
It is true that higher studies and a university degree can remarkably contribute to one's success. But there is another group of people who believe that higher education can only provide you a degree but experience matters the most. Many career aspirants live under a dilemma and in the process, remain indecisive. This essay tries to weigh both the perspectives and to come up with a concrete opinion. Let’s first understand why some students want to seek a job early. They are various reasons behind this. There are several young people who have plans to start a business of their own and for that, they want to gain experience. As a result, they join a job. There also are other type of students who, though want to pursue high studies but cannot because they come from a weak financial background and so, have a pressing need for job.
It is true that higher studies and a university degree can
remarkably
contribute to one's success.
But
there is another group of
people
who believe that higher education can
only
provide you a degree
but
experience matters the most.
Many
career aspirants
live
under a dilemma and in the process, remain indecisive. This essay tries to weigh both the perspectives and to
come
up with a concrete opinion.

Let
’s
first
understand why
some
students want to seek a job early. They are various reasons behind this. There are several young
people
who have plans to
start
a business of their
own
and for that, they want to gain experience.
As a result
, they
join
a job. There
also
are other type of students who, though want to pursue high studies
but
cannot
because
they
come
from a weak financial background and
so
, have a pressing need for job.
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IELTS essay Some people are of the view that only university education can ensure success, whereas many others oppose the view.

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  American English
2 paragraphs
148 words
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