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some people are of the opinion that the key to success and business is to possess a unique product to sell. to what extent do you agree or disagree.

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Some people think that the secret to business success now a days is simply to manufacture something unique. It is a fact that new and unique things have always been the focus of buyers, but that does not think business success depends on just one thing there are other things to consider if you want to grow your business. In this essay I will point out some aspects justify my opinion. selling something unique does not eliminate the responsibility of any business individual, on the contrary it increases many times over. Maintaining the quality after manufacturing something unique is mammoth challenge. After successfully manufacturing and bringing a unique item to market, you are not able to resolve complaints from customers and even also fail to maintain its quality, your business will gradually start to lose. In order to make any business successful the ability of the employees and the work they do is very considerable. Employees only receive salaries so it is a common observation that did not work diligently. therefore it is important to ensure that employees and mentally and physically prosper to ensure their involvement is filled In business activities if the needs of employees are not being considered they will surely considered changing jobs this will reduce the number of employees involved in the production of unique products and the company will be disturbed lysed as a result hiring new employees and training them will wasted lot of time and money. To summarise the findings, I would say that key to making a successful business is not only the manufacture unique product but many other factors should be considered. Such as accurate pricing, no compromise on quality and taking care of employees.
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success
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. It is a fact that new and
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unique
things have always been the focus of buyers,
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success depends on
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one thing there are other things to consider if you want to grow your
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. In this essay I will point out
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aspects justify my opinion.

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selling
something
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unique
does not eliminate the responsibility of any
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individual,
on the contrary
it increases
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many
times over. Maintaining the quality after manufacturing something
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unique
is mammoth challenge. After
successfully
manufacturing and bringing a
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unique
item to market, you are not able to resolve complaints from customers and even
also
fail to maintain its quality, your
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business
will
gradually
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to lose.

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successful the ability of the
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and the work they do is
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considerable.
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and mentally and
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prosper to ensure their involvement
is filled
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business
activities if the needs of
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changing jobs this will
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involved in the production of
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products and the
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company
will
be disturbed
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lysed
as a result
hiring new
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employees
and training them will
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wasted
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lot of
time and money.

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the findings, I would say that key to making a successful
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is not
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the manufacture
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unique
product
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other factors should
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employees
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IELTS essay some people are of the opinion that the key to success and business is to possess a unique product to sell.

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
285 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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