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some people are born with talent and other says they get it by time.to what extent do you agree or disagreee.

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Some people say that every person have a talent inside but are know or other are unknown. People are born with a certain talents for sports or of music and other are not. I believe that every person have a speciality inside them. I believe that talent can be attributed to the fact that some people are born with certain talents like sports or music, acting, dance and many other things. Moreover, everyone say's it's a god gifted talent. For instance, take the case of Shakutala Devi she never go to school but she is famous for her name human calcutor. S. D calculate fast then computer and never give wrong answer. Shakutala devi won prizes from more than 10 countries London, Africa, German, Spain USA etc.
Some
people
say that every person have a
talent
inside
but
are know or other are unknown.
People
are born
with a certain
talents
for sports or of music and other are not. I believe that every person have a
speciality
inside them. I believe that
talent
can
be attributed
to the fact that
some
people
are born
with certain
talents
like sports or music, acting, dance and
many
other things.
Moreover
, everyone say's it's a god gifted
talent
.
For instance
, take the case of
Shakutala
Devi she never
go
to school
but
she is
famous
for her name human
calcutor
. S. D calculate
fast
then computer and never give
wrong
answer.
Shakutala
devi
won prizes from more than 10 countries London, Africa, German, Spain USA etc.
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IELTS essay some people are born with talent and other says they get it by time. e.

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127 words
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