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Nowadays the way many people interact with each other has changed because of technology. In what ways has technology affected the types of relationships people make? Has this become a positive or negative development?

Nowadays the way many people interact with each other has changed because of technology. In what ways has technology affected the types of relationships people make? Has this become a positive or negative development? AjPqe
Technology has made an impact on everyday lifestyle in every aspect. It has changed the way people interact with their loved ones so as the types of relationships people make. From its introduction to the human race technology is making everything easier for people. Nowadays it takes only a second to make a conversation with dear ones. So, the urge to conversate and the depth of conversation has surely reduced. Previously, people needed to wait for several days to see a person who is living in another city but due to the introduction of technology he or she is just one call away. This has made the process easier, but also has lightened the emotion. Moreover, as we are always surrounded by technology, we are always busy with our phones, ipods etc. Due to this, when we are even talking to someone in person we often do not provide the conversation our most attention. As a result we fail to make an impactful communication. To conclude, due to all these reasons I believe technology has affected the relationships people make develop negatively.
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as the types of relationships
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. From its introduction to the human race
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technology
is making everything easier for
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people
. Nowadays it takes
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make
a conversation with dear
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.
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conversate
and the depth of conversation has
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reduced
. Previously,
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people
needed to wait for several days to
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see
a person who is living in another city
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technology
he or she is
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one call away. This has made the process easier,
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has lightened the emotion.
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technology
, we are always busy with our phones,
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ipods
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do not provide the conversation our most attention.
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a result we fail to
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an impactful communication.
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the relationships
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develop
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IELTS essay Nowadays the way many people interact with each other has changed because of technology. In what ways has technology affected the types of relationships people make? Has this become a positive or negative development?

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