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Some parents are evict with parents

Some parents are evict with parents VBqnO
Doing oppression with parents is a mammoth issue worldwide, which has an negative impact on environment. Since the people who evict to their parents from dwelling place, can not never successful in their life either. Those who have not money, yet some people expel their caretakers because of solely expenses. However, when the parents are not with them then they feel sadness. For example the people obtain long punishment in life who expel parents from home. Although if the people behaviour are not well with parents, in future the sons will same tyranny with them.
Doing oppression with
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is a mammoth issue worldwide, which has
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an
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impact on environment. Since the
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people
who evict to their
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from dwelling place, can
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not never
successful in their life either. Those who have not money,
yet
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some
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people
expel their caretakers
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because
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expenses.
However
, when the
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parents
are not with them then they feel sadness.
For example
the
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people
obtain long punishment in life who expel
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parents
from home. Although if the
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people
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behaviour
are not well with
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parents
, in future the sons will same tyranny with them.

IELTS essay Some parents are evict with parents

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
95 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
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4.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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