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You should spend about 40 minutes on this task. Write about the following topic. Some organisations believe that their employees should dress smartly. Others value quality of work above appearance. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. You should write at least 250 words.

Some organisations believe that their employees should dress smartly. Others value quality of work above appearance. VamK
Dressing smartly for a job has always been valued in some industries while it has been argued that employers should focus on the performance rather than what the employee wears or looks like. I believe that both of these arguments are valid depending on the job or the industry that people work in. On one hand, there are several industries that demand that their employees should dress smart. Most companies that operate in these industries have their employees working as representatives of their business which in turn employees to dress up for their work. For instance, sales representatives or receptionist have to dress carefully for their meetings with clients as they are directly representing the values of their employers to the customers. Alternatively, companies also believe that appearing and dressing smarter will help to enforce a standard among employees to appear neat and tidy, like in most business houses and law firms. On the other hand, it is unnecessary for people who work behind the scenes do not have to stress on the hassle of dressing smartly. While they might need to dress carefully during special meetings or presentations, it proves to be an issue to choose to wear a suit and tie every single day. The belief has also risen in people that clothes are a part of creative expression, so having a uniform in a company is seen as a suppression of their creative freedom. In my opinion, companies should not implement a dressing code to dress a certain way unless it does not align with the core values of the industry. Allowing employees to dress comfortably has proved to make them more productive in their work. Hence, corporate giants, these days are implementing this rule. I
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industry
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employees
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dress
smart. Most
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companies
that operate in these
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industries
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employees
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dress
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work
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, sales representatives or receptionist
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dress
carefully
for their meetings with clients as they are
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Alternatively
,
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companies
also
believe that appearing and
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dressing
smarter will
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help
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employees
to appear neat and tidy, like in most business
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houses
and law firms.

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people
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work
behind the scenes do not
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stress
on the hassle of
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dressing
smartly
. While they might need to
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dress
carefully
during special meetings or presentations, it proves to be an issue to choose to wear a suit and tie every single day. The belief has
also
risen in
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people
that clothes are a part of creative expression,
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so
having a uniform in a
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company
is
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seen
as a suppression of their creative freedom.

In my opinion,
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companies
should not implement a
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dressing
code to
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dress
a certain way unless it does not align with the core values of the
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industry
. Allowing
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employees
to
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dress
comfortably
has proved to
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make
them more productive in their
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work
.
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, corporate giants, these days are implementing this
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rule
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IELTS essay Some organisations believe that their employees should dress smartly. Others value quality of work above appearance.

Essay
  American English
5 paragraphs
288 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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