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Some experts claim that in order to ensure safety of bicycler government should make tests to get permission to ride a bike. Do you agree or disagree?

Some experts claim that in order to ensure safety of bicycler government should make tests to get permission to ride a bike. G95Kw
Many professionals argued that government should test riding abilities of people due to increase bikers safety in traffic. I completely agree that it is vital for everyone who has a bicycle. I believe that organising this kind of exams may lead to follow regular traffic rules and even reduce traffic congestions. For instance biker who do not have riding ability might interrupt to others and also damage himself or herself. For this reason producing test gives bikers safety and prevent traffic congestion. Furthermore making exams people who requires to ride a bike by government or sport committees leads to appear professional bikers automatically. Moreover, in sport communities bikers might not have any challenges due to testing their skills and have reserve bicyclers. In conclusion, I strongly agree that organising tests have variety of advantages such as having professionals who has great riding skills and reduce traffic congestions.
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riding abilities of
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this kind of exams may lead to follow regular
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do not have riding ability might interrupt to others and
also
damage himself or herself.
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producing
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test
gives bikers safety and
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prevent
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congestion.
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making exams
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people
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requires
to ride a bike by
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government
or sport committees leads to appear professional bikers
automatically
.
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, in sport communities bikers might not have any challenges due to testing their
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skills
and have reserve bicyclers.
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agree
that
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organising
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tests
have variety of advantages such as having professionals
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who
has great riding
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skills
and
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reduce
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congestions.
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IELTS essay Some experts claim that in order to ensure safety of bicycler government should make tests to get permission to ride a bike.

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  American English
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