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Some countries use their cultural attractions as a way of encouraging tourists to visit the country. Some people argue that the countries culture is damaged or destroyed by the tourist industry , Do you agree or disagree with this view.

Some countries use their cultural attractions as a way of encouraging tourists to visit the country. Some people argue that the countries culture is damaged or destroyed by the tourist industry, with this view. aqqRV
The tourism industry plays a pivotal role in global economies. Today, tourism is the largest employer and generator of foreign exchange — this is especially vital for the economic growth of developing countries that strive to attract visitors from all around the world to explore their cultural and natural treasures. Thailand has a very unique culture. Thai food is very popular across the world especially tom yum kong.
The tourism industry plays a pivotal role in global economies.
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Today
, tourism is the largest employer and generator of foreign exchange — this is
especially
vital for the economic growth of
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
developing countries
that strive to attract visitors from all around the world to explore their cultural and natural treasures.

Thailand has a
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very unique
culture. Thai food is
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very
popular across the world
especially
tom yum
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kong
.
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IELTS essay Some countries use their cultural attractions as a way of encouraging tourists to visit the country. Some people argue that the countries culture is damaged or destroyed by the tourist industry, with this view.

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  American English
2 paragraphs
68 words
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