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Some countries have free health services. However, some people feel that those who live unhealthy lifestyles should not receive free healthcare. Do you agree or disagree with this view?

Some countries have free health services. However, some people feel that those who live unhealthy lifestyles should not receive free healthcare. with this view? b1MQ
Health is basic human need, thus several countries offers free healthcare system. However, there are a several people are opposed to such system and claims that those who live unhealthy should be responsible for their own health. This essay will argue that free health care is beneficial to society. As an increase of diseases related to unhealthy lifestyle emerge, there are those who believe that free healthcare would encourage more people to live unhealthy and irresponsibly, and ultimately, this would result to burden the government and taxpayers. Most who agree with this opinion, argue that the government should not be responsible for everyone’s health, especially those who do not work, instead liability should be with the individual, to illustrate, those who work receive health insurance as one of the benefits from the company. This concerns are valid, however the increasing value of private health insurance and medicine indicates health is now luxury only few can afford. In countries without free healthcare, cost of medical fees and medicine has increased significantly, Additionally, health coverage benefits are only offered by big companies, which results to low income individual being at the disadvantage, thus, this discourages people to consult a physician even with symptoms of illness, which leads to more complications or fatality, as an example, a person suffering from early signs of stroke such as severe headache would prefer to self-medicate instead of a medical consult, resulting to a more serious consequence. Research shows that countries with free medical services has higher life expectancy rates, furthermore, record shows that individuals who suffer from chronic illness are able to work like normal healthy person by means of subsidized medication maintenance, hence they are able to pay their taxes and contribute to society. If medical help is accessible to everyone, the overall public welfare will improve. In conclusion, free healthcare gives everyone an equal opportunity to be healthy regardless of their lifestyle and socio-economic status, which befits the general public in the long run.
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several countries offers
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free
healthcare system.
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, there are a several
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people
are opposed
to such system and claims that those
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who
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live
unhealthy should be responsible for their
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own
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health
. This essay will argue that
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free
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health
care is beneficial to society.

As an increase of diseases related to unhealthy lifestyle emerge, there are those
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who
believe that
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free
healthcare would encourage more
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people
to
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live
unhealthy and
irresponsibly
, and
ultimately
, this would result to burden the
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government
and taxpayers. Most
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who
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agree
with this opinion, argue that the
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government
should not be responsible for everyone’s
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health
,
especially
those
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who
do not work,
instead
liability should be with the individual, to illustrate, those
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who
work receive
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health
insurance as one of the benefits from the
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company
.
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concerns are valid,
however
the increasing value of private
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health
insurance and medicine indicates
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health
is
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now
luxury
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only
few can afford.

In countries without
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free
healthcare, cost of
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medical
fees and medicine has increased
significantly
,
Additionally
,
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health
coverage benefits are
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only
offered by
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big
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companies
, which results to low income individual being at the disadvantage,
thus
, this discourages
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people
to consult a physician even with symptoms of illness, which leads to more complications or fatality, as an example, a person suffering from early signs of stroke such as severe headache would prefer to self-medicate
instead
of a
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medical
consult, resulting to a more serious consequence. Research
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shows
that countries with
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free
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medical
services has higher life expectancy rates,
furthermore
, record
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shows
that individuals
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who
suffer from chronic illness are able to work like normal healthy person by means of subsidized medication maintenance,
hence
they are able to pay their taxes and contribute to society. If
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medical
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help
is accessible to everyone, the
overall
public welfare will
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improve
.

In conclusion
,
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healthcare gives everyone an equal opportunity to be healthy regardless of their lifestyle and
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socio-economic
status, which befits the
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general public
in the long run.
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IELTS essay Some countries have free health services. However, some people feel that those who live unhealthy lifestyles should not receive free healthcare. with this view?

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
330 words
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