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Living in country where you have to speak a foreign language can cause serious social problems, as well as practical problems.

Living in country where you have to speak a foreign language can cause serious social problems, as well as practical problems. W07q
Nowadays, Poeple move to first tier foreign countries where they can get more exposoure to explore their self. For some poeple it could be benifical while some people facing the social problems and practical problems due to foreign language. First and formost, every country have thier own different type of culutre and it became a barrier for non native people. People are locked with their own cultural bounties so adopation of new culture becoome a difficult. For instance, One of my classmate getting married and they invited to me. I went there to attend the marriage and I got bored beacuse the culture of marriage was totoally diffrent from us. Marriage music oviously play in their native language. That day I feel social problem with foriegn people. along with that, in india, living with opposite gender without marriage is banned while in canada specially in qubec, people encourage this things and it satisfied the law if both poeple live together without marriage. When talking about the indian people specially for gujarati people, they always looking for delious food and there face lots of problems to find the food. People spent money on travel hometown just to statisfied their carving. According to study on students, 76% of students didn't find the teast which they wanted. When talking about the indian people specially for gujarati people, they always looking for delious food and there face lots of problems to find the food. People spent money on travel hometown just to statisfied their carving. According to study on students, 76% of students didn't find the teast which they wanted. To conclude, Foreign country can grow us economically but when talking about the culture, language became the barrier. While foodies always missing their hometown to satisfied their craving.
Nowadays,
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Poeple
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more
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exposoure
to explore their self. For
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poeple
it could be
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benifical
while
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facing the social
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problems
due to foreign language.

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, every country have
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own
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different
type of
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culutre
and it became a barrier for
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non native
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people
.
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are locked
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cultural bounties
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adopation
of new culture
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becoome
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a difficult
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, One of my classmate getting
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married and
they invited to me. I went there to attend the
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marriage
and I
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bored
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was
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totoally
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diffrent
from us.
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music
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oviously
play in their native language. That day I feel social
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problem
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foriegn
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people
.
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along
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india
, living with opposite gender without
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is banned
while in
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canada
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qubec
,
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encourage
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poeple
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indian
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people
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gujarati
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people
,
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delious
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food
and there face lots of
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to
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the
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.
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spent money on travel hometown
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statisfied
their carving. According to study on
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students
, 76% of
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didn't
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teast
which they wanted. When talking about the
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indian
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specially
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gujarati
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,
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delious
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food
and there face lots of
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to
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find
the
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food
.
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People
spent money on travel hometown
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to
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statisfied
their carving.

According to study on
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students
, 76% of
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students
didn't
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find
the
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teast
which they wanted.

To conclude
, Foreign country can grow us
economically
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when talking about the culture, language became the barrier.
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While
foodies always missing their hometown to satisfied their craving.
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IELTS essay Living in country where you have to speak a foreign language can cause serious social problems, as well as practical problems.

Essay
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5 paragraphs
294 words
6.0
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