Some companies sponsor sport as a way to advertise themselves Some people think it is good while others think there are disadvantages Discuss both views and give your opinion v.2
Some companies sponsor sport as a way to advertise themselves Some people think it is good while others think there are disadvantages 2
The way of advertisement has changed over the time, nowadays sponsorship is a common among the others ways. Some argued that there are many benefits for advertising, while other people think it has more drawbacks. Both views are valid, in my opinion, the advantages more than disadvantages
On the one hand, some people claimed that advertising is modern art and it a key part of modern business. The most obvious advantage is that companies can tell us about their product, without it we have fewer choices. For example, most of the people know Nick and Adidas brand through their advertising in the world cup of football. Also, advertising is a creative industry that employs many people, without it, there would be high unemployment.
On the other hand, although, there are advantages of sponsorship they are also some disadvantages. Sometimes advertisement can manipulate people, especially in cloth trend. Furthermore, as we live in consumer culture, advertisement companies persuade us to follow the latest trend and encouraged us to associate a certain brand with a higher status. Moreover, children can easily be influenced by advertisement and some of them put pressure on a parent to buy think. For instance, my smallest brother asked my father to upgrade his phone with every new series.
To sum-up, the benefit of sponsorships is a controversial topic, in my point of view the advantages of it overweight the disadvantages.
The way of
advertisement
has
changed
over the time, nowadays sponsorship is a common among the others ways.
Some
argued that there are
many
benefits for advertising, while other
people
think
it has more drawbacks. Both views are valid, in my opinion, the
advantages
more than
disadvantages
On the one hand,
some
people
claimed that advertising is modern art and
it
a key part of modern business. The most obvious
advantage
is that
companies
can
tell
us about their product, without
it
we have fewer choices.
For example
, most of the
people
know Nick and Adidas brand through their advertising in the world cup of football.
Also
, advertising is a creative industry that employs
many
people
, without it, there would be high unemployment.
On the other hand
, although, there are
advantages
of sponsorship they are
also
some
disadvantages.
Sometimes
advertisement
can manipulate
people
,
especially
in cloth trend.
Furthermore
, as we
live
in consumer culture,
advertisement
companies
persuade us to follow the latest trend and encouraged us to associate a certain brand with a higher status.
Moreover
, children can
easily
be influenced
by
advertisement
and
some
of them put pressure on a parent to
buy
think
.
For instance
, my smallest brother asked my father to upgrade his phone with every new series.
To sum-up, the benefit of sponsorships is a controversial topic, in my point of view the
advantages
of it overweight the disadvantages.
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