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Some children find some school subjects difficult (for example maths or philosophy), so these subjects should be optional rather than compulsory. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your answers and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. Work in your pair to write at least 250 words

There has been much discussion revolving around the issue of difficult school subjects that should be elective rather than compulsory. In this essay, I will explain why I believed that students ought to have their rights to choose what they want to study compared with why they shouldn’t. The merits of elective subjects are manifest. Firstly, students could choose only necessary subjects for their future occupations.
There has been much discussion revolving around the issue of difficult school subjects that should be elective
rather
than compulsory. In this essay, I will
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
explain
why I believed that students ought to have their rights to choose what they want to study compared with why they shouldn’t.

The merits of elective subjects are manifest.
Firstly
, students could choose
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
only
necessary subjects for their future occupations.

IELTS essay Some children find some school subjects difficult (for example maths or philosophy), so these subjects should be optional rather than compulsory. Work in your pair to

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