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Some Businesses Find That Their Employees Lack Basic Interpersonal Skills

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Nowadays, In most of the fields employees work as a team, and in many businesses freshers are lacking in basic interpersonal skills, resulting in their inability to work as a team player. This essay will discuss the reasons behind it and then present some suggestions to alleviate these potential problems. There are several reasons behind new joinee's lack of ability to work with their peers. Firstly, technical skills and experties are given more priority and soft skills are getting ignored when it comes to hire new people. For example, many of the compnies hiring new talents use methods such as writing and apptitude tests, and interview are also around technical abilities, neglecting interpersonal skills. Another reason is education today weigh more on teachnical and theoritical education. Group activities and team projects are not given much importance in schools and colleges. So, there are no such activities during their education that helps them to improve their soft skills as well. Companies can adopt certain policies to hire new graduates or they can train those individuals and help them to improve such qualities. There many other methods for hiring which can test their both technical and soft skills. In the hiring procedures, activities such as group dicussions and varied interviews can be introduced to examine both side of the interviewee. On the other hand, companies can spend some time to teach about corporate life and working in a team. To cite an example, big oranizations which can afford some expenditure could create a coursework for new joiners and help them grow in soft skills. To sum up, it is irrefutable that many freshers face the problem of lack of interpersonal skills due to various factors. However, this can be handled successfully by improving hiring methods or by training them after the recruit.
Nowadays, In most of the fields employees work as a
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, and in
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businesses freshers are lacking in basic interpersonal
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skills
, resulting in their inability to work as a
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team
player. This essay will discuss the reasons behind it and then present
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suggestions to alleviate these potential problems.

There are several reasons behind
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joinee
's lack of ability to work with their peers.
Firstly
, technical
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skills
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experties
are
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given
more priority and
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soft
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skills
are getting
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ignored
when it
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comes
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.
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of the
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compnies
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hiring
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talents
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methods such as writing and
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apptitude
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tests
, and interview are
also
around technical abilities, neglecting interpersonal
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skills
. Another reason is education
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today
weigh more on
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teachnical
and
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theoritical
education. Group activities and
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projects are not
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given
much importance in schools and colleges.
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So
, there are no such activities during their education that
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helps
them to
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improve
their
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soft
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skills
as well
.

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Companies
can adopt certain policies to hire
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graduates or
they can train those individuals and
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help
them to
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improve
such qualities. There
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other methods for
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hiring
which can
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test
their both technical and
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soft
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skills
. In the
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procedures, activities such as group
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dicussions
and varied interviews can
be introduced
to examine both side of the interviewee.
On the other hand
,
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companies
can spend
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some
time to teach about corporate life and working in a
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team
. To cite an example,
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big
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oranizations
which can afford
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some
expenditure could create a coursework for
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new
joiners and
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help
them grow in
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soft
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skills
.

To sum up, it is irrefutable that
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many
freshers face the problem of lack of interpersonal
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skills
due to various factors.
However
, this can
be handled
successfully
by improving
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hiring
methods or by training them after the recruit.
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IELTS essay Some Businesses Find That Their Employees Lack Basic Interpersonal Skills

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  American English
4 paragraphs
300 words
6.0
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