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Education is a lifelong task. Do you agree or disagree with this statement .Give reasons to substantiate your opinion.

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Education is an essential part of everyone's life, and it is an very important role in the growth of an individual's life. Some may argue that tutoring is a lifelong process. I tend to agree with this view and feel that schooling is necessary for a person's entire life. This essay present arguments to justify this view. First of all, tuition gives more knowledge to all human being. To expand only for instructions we can know about the world's unknoewn thing. It would helps our life easy and more beneficial. For example, in maths we studied add and subtraction and at all, it will encourage to a person's day to day life. That's why all are agreed that education is relevant to all people. Secondly, nowadays the money has essential for survival and good living. Without money we can not do anything in the world. While, for get better salary education is signifiacnt one. For a better position in working field and society instruction is imperative in human being's life. Even though better qualities are get from good education only. For instance, a educated person can know how to behave in public place and how to talk. As a result that person get more respectfulness from others. It is very intresting thing for every individual. To sum up, I strongly believe that education is more beneficial than everything. Because it gives more happy and respectfulness from the society and family

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