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Society would benefit from a complete ban on all forms of advertisement what extent do you agree or disagree

Society would benefit from a complete ban on all forms of advertisement what extent OWa7
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advertisement
is essential part in our
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day to day
life it
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helps
to spread the information to the
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people
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many
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people
believe this
however
few
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people
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think
that There are quite disadvantages of
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advertisement
search lobby is in
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favour
of complete Ban of
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advertisements
I am completely
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disagree
with it

Advertisement is not
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only
about promote
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company’s
product
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but
also
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it
helpful to educate the society If suppose
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advertisement
is restricted
citizens of the country won't be
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to
aware about
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government
programs those might be helpful recently in
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covid-19
pandemic
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government
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governments
are using
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advertisement
concept to share awareness and
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precautionsThat
nice to be
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consider
to
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prevent
from virus

Moreover
,
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advertisement
is a stream which is
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use
by various manufacturing
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companies
to promote its products.
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we
can
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see
series of
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advertisements
on TV or in newspapers, novels.
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recently
we can
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see
advertising channels like
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Naaptol
HomeShop18 which
usually
intended to populate information and schemes for new
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products


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lastly
To populate products it
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need
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advertisement
agencies,
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skills
, set of marketing strategies.
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so
it
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provide
vast jobs to individual who gain Graduation like MBA.
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actors
or stars can
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get
Fame by working
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in in
an
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advertisement
we can
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see
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many
film stars cricketers and other celebrities who
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works
for an address
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advertisement
for particular production
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company


although it has
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good
benefits
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but
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some
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people
are in
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favour
of restrictions of the
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advertisements
the argues that search
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advertisements
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companies
are clever and the target is to
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just
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get
benefit to achieve it they are avoiding basic principles in
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some
cases actor or actress can promote the items without review to it
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whitch
can have
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a
adverse impact
moreover
they
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argues
that few
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companies
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I promoting
adult or violet contents in
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advertisement
which can have a
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negative
impact on children mind set as they are likely to
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watch
advertisements

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however
advantages are over weighted then disadvantages by introducing
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some
restrictions we can overcome from the drawbacks, like
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government
can form
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some
authorities which can regulate
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advertisement
agencies And validate
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advertisements
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before
it
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get
released
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so
do more should have adverse impact
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so
I cannot
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agreed
that
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advertisement
not
be banned
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IELTS essay Society would benefit from a complete ban on all forms of advertisement what extent

Essay
  American English
6 paragraphs
356 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 5.5
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