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Society is based on rules and laws. It could not function if individuals were free to do whatever they wanted to do. To what extent do you agree or disagree

Society is based on rules and laws. It could not function if individuals were free to do whatever they wanted to do. WJNW
There is no doubt in saying that every society runs on some sort of restrictions as well as on law and order. Whereas, if people are set free of laws which are implemented on them that helps society in running smoothly, there will be a definite downfall in its functioning. I totally agree with the statement because it will increase the crime rate and also lead to discrimination and injustice. To begin with, eradication of rules and regulations from the society will have a drastic impact on the crime rates. As people will not resist themselves in committing crimes and thus, have no fear of the consequences. Moreover, people will begin carrying lethal weapons openly which may lead to the destruction of the society and the nation itself. For instance, In early 14th century, when there were no codes of conduct, the Egyptians used to kill people for no reason which resulted in the downfall of the nation. Apart from this, the other two factors like discrimination and injustice will rise to its peak and will be very common among the people as the people who will be wealthy enough to support their living, will harass other people for their basic fundaments. Additionally, it may also lead to total injustice because the people who will be rich as compared to others will try to take away all the money from others and will be more focused in filling up their own pockets by setting higher rates of crops or other goods that are required for survival. To illustrate, in the 18th century, Indian landlords used to purchase crops at a very reasonable price but they used to sell these crops to other people at a very high rate which was a sort of complete injustice to the farmers as well as to the individuals. In conclusion, abolishment of restrictions which are imposed on the society will have an adverse effect and will lead to evil practices but also there will be no equality in the human race.
There is no doubt in saying that every
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society
runs on
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some
sort of restrictions
as well
as on law and order. Whereas, if
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people
are set
free of laws which
are implemented
on them that
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helps
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society
in running
smoothly
, there will be a
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definite
downfall in its functioning. I
totally
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agree
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because
it will increase the crime
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rate
and
also
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lead
to discrimination and
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injustice
. To
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begin
with, eradication of
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rules
and regulations from the
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society
will have a drastic impact on the crime
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rates
. As
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people
will not resist themselves in committing crimes and
thus
, have no fear of the consequences.
Moreover
,
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people
will
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begin
carrying lethal weapons
openly
which may
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lead
to the destruction of the
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society
and the nation itself.
For instance
, In early 14th century, when there were no codes of conduct, the Egyptians
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used
to kill
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people
for no reason which resulted in the downfall of the nation.

Apart from this, the
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other
two factors like discrimination and
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injustice
will rise to its peak and will be
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very
common among the
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people
as the
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people
who will be wealthy
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enough
to support their living, will harass
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other
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people
for their basic fundaments.
Additionally
, it may
also
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lead
to total
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injustice
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because
the
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people
who will be rich as compared to others will try to take away all the money from others and will be more focused in filling up their
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own
pockets by setting higher
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rates
of crops or
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other
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goods
that
are required
for survival. To illustrate, in the 18th century, Indian landlords
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used
to
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purchase
crops at a
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very
reasonable price
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but
they
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used
to sell these crops to
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other
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people
at a
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very
high
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rate
which was a sort of complete
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injustice
to the farmers
as well
as to the individuals.

In conclusion
, abolishment of restrictions which
are imposed
on the
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society
will have an adverse effect and will
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lead
to evil practices
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but
also
there will be no equality in the human race.
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IELTS essay Society is based on rules and laws. It could not function if individuals were free to do whatever they wanted to do.

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