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Social media has replaced the traditional method of communicating and people use more and more of social media to communicate and follow news and events. Do you think that the advantages outweigh the disadvantages

Social media has replaced the traditional method of communicating and people use more and more of social media to communicate and follow news and events. Do you think that the advantages outweigh the disadvantages 59KV
It is undeniable fact that some social networking websites took the place of conventional way, which used for interaction and nowadays individuals prefer social networking sites to communicate with other people as well as follow news and events. In my perspective, it has more merits as compared to it's drawbacks, because it not only convenient but also more accessible Using social networking sites is very effective way to communicate with loved ones as well as fast way to acquire knowledge about happening of surrounding. In other words, old ways of interaction with other individual's were neither effective nor fast as masses had to wait for long time to get messages from dear ones. For instance, in past time if individuals wrote a letter to loved ones, which took a lot of time for whole process but with the assist of social networking sites people can easily interact with people just in fractions of second either they live close or in other parts of nation. However, social media is convenient way to communicate but it also spreads rumours in public and also reduce face to face interaction. To illustrate, some people with the aid of social media are spreading fake news, which encourage youngsters to take part in wrong activities. Nevertheless, social networking sites minimized physical interaction between individuals, To exemplify it, in prevaling scenario, it is generally seen that individuals use social applications such as whatsapp and facebook to great their friends and family on special events and festivals instead of meet them personally. Hence, moden socual networking websites are reducing the physical connection amongst individuals. To conclude, although social media sites help individuals to communicate in terms of time saving and affordable as well but their demerits can not be neglected as it spreads rumours and mitigate face to face interaction among them
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IELTS essay Social media has replaced the traditional method of communicating and people use more and more of social media to communicate and follow news and events. Do you think that the advantages outweigh the disadvantages

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303 words
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