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Social and demographic changes: The revolution in health care

Social and demographic changes: The revolution in health care xOW61
The consumer trends: slow - simple living and “Health is wealth” (Kadence International, 2020). During the pandemic, this will persist in the long-term. Anxiety and sadness have skyrocketed as a result of the outbreak and the ensuing lockdowns. Ex: The mental wellness of 87% of Chinese customers is a top priority and the customers are shifting their attention away from electronic gadgets to concentrate on current life (Kadence International, 2020).
The consumer trends: slow
-
simple living and “Health is wealth” (
Kadence
International, 2020).

During the pandemic, this will persist in the long-term. Anxiety and sadness have skyrocketed
as a result
of the outbreak and the ensuing lockdowns.

Ex: The mental wellness of 87% of Chinese customers is a top priority and the customers are shifting their attention away from electronic gadgets to concentrate on
current
life (
Kadence
International, 2020).
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IELTS essay Social and demographic changes: The revolution in health care

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3 paragraphs
70 words
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