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Smoking is injurious for health

Smoking is injurious for health 9QwB3
Smoking is detrimental hazard. i agree with proffered statement reasons for which are eluciated in below paragraphs. However cigrete is defective our body, yet people addicted for this. Many causes are their for instance stress, depression, peer pressure. Human tendency is that for share their feelings happy as well as sad they explore something many people choose smoking. Everyone knows that it's dangerous for health although they do. While every tabacoo products have warning on their packets but people ignore it. Moreover people also know that they have serious health issues if they taking these things regularly like cancer, it effects many parts of our body for Eg. Lunges, mouth, liver so on. Habits never change they are addicted for these things. I opine that people use nicotes chwigum instead of smoking government take strick step for adults Agglomerating all the above enunciated points it can be recapitulated that smoking is totally banned on public places on other hand who are hibituated for these people's government scheduled rehelitation camps. So we win and make tabacoo free environment.
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Smoking
is detrimental hazard.
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i
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agree
with proffered statement reasons for which are
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eluciated
in below paragraphs.
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However
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cigrete
is defective our body,
yet
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people
addicted for this.
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Many
causes are their
for instance
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stress
, depression, peer pressure. Human tendency is that for share their feelings happy
as well
as sad they explore something
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many
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people
choose
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smoking
. Everyone knows that it's
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dangerous
for health although they do. While every
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tabacoo
products have warning on their packets
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but
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people
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ignore
it.
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Moreover
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people
also
know that they have serious health issues if
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they taking
these things
regularly
like cancer, it effects
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many
parts of our body for
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Eg.
Lunges, mouth, liver
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so
on. Habits never
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change
they
are addicted
for these things. I opine that
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people
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use
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nicotes
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chwigum
instead
of
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smoking
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government
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take strick
step for adults Agglomerating all the above enunciated points it can
be recapitulated
that
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smoking
is
totally
banned on public places on other hand who are
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hibituated
for these
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people
's
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government
scheduled
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rehelitation
camps.
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So
we win and
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make
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tabacoo
free environment.
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IELTS essay Smoking is injurious for health

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
177 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1
5.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 5.5
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