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smartphone ownership as a percentage of population in a country and level of education

smartphone ownership as a percentage of population in a country and level of education PgBAX

The pictorial representation illustrates the use of mobile phones past over a decade in a country, between the population and various segments in education. Overall, it can be witnessed from the data that the utilization of cellular phones to approximately double in last 10 years, from 40% to 85%, among the population in the country. On the other hand, merely 15% of the high school graduates used phones during the year 2000 that rose to 45% in next 10 years. The doctorate degree holders used the smartphones to almost 75%, thou it’s not a major spike, contributing to 90% over a decade. The illustration also features that the usage of phones by a percentile of people has almost doubled since 2000 to 2010. The usage among the scholars in 2010 is equal to the usage by the people in the same year, being 60%, although it was slightly lower than half in 2004.

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