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Should women join armed forces or not

Should women join armed forces or not mWWNd
it's true that men are more physically strong and challengable as compared to women but physical strength is not only the criteria to fight in battlefield. Women are more careful and mentally strong in comparison with men. If women has given a chance to prove themselves in the battlefield then they can handle the situation in more effective manner. Women have more managerial skills which would help them to fought a battle. In contrary, role models matters a lot especially for women. Such women inspires other females to be more ambitious and aimed towards their dreams and goals. armed ladies can set the minds of women and can motivate them to make their future bright. Lifting women up and encouraging each other to reach their fullest potential is the only way to step out to the success. As in present time it is important for females to support each other. In conclusion it requires a societal change first that women should be permitted to join armed forces. Women have courage and strength as efficient as men. Ips Kiran Bedi is suitable example for proving that women are enough strong to join defence forces
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's true that
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men
are more
physically
strong and
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challengable
as compared to
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women
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but
physical strength is not
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only
the criteria to fight in battlefield.
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Women
are more careful and mentally strong
in comparison
with
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men
. If
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women
has
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given
a chance to prove themselves in the battlefield then they can handle the situation in more effective manner.
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Women
have more managerial
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skills
which would
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help
them
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to fought
a battle. In contrary, role models matters a lot
especially
for
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women
. Such
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women
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inspires
other females to be more ambitious and aimed towards their dreams and goals.
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armed
ladies can set the minds of
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women
and can motivate them to
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make
their future bright. Lifting
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women
up and encouraging each other to reach their fullest potential is the
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only
way to step out to the success. As in present time it is
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important
for females to support each other.

In
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conclusion it
requires a societal
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change
first
that
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women
should
be permitted
to
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join
armed forces.
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Women
have courage and strength as efficient as
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men
.
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Ips
Kiran
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Bedi
is suitable example for proving that
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women
are
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enough
strong to
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join
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defence
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forces
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IELTS essay Should women join armed forces or not

Essay
  American English
2 paragraphs
192 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
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5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.0
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  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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Lexical Resource: 5.0
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 5.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
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