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should school require forein language to learn

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A number of people thinks by learning foreign language in schools could make them more educated than others who do not learn foreign language at all. In my experience, I have been learning english since I was 8 years old back in my school, that makes me more astute and confident if I should talk to people who comes from english spoken country. I think all school should require their students to learn foreign language, starting from english we can learn any other language that we want easily and confidently than we never want to learn any foreign language.
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all school should require their students to
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, starting from
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IELTS essay should school require forein language to learn

Essay
  American English
3 paragraphs
99 words
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