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Furthermore, it not only benefits indivuals in a lot of ways, it also avails the nation altogether. Art museums and works of art are playing an important role for attracting cultural tourists to cities and regions from all over the world. And, it creates opportunity to get job simply in the job market for artists. In brief, investing in art has a great return financially while improving the reputation of the country. Jor75

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