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Should human rights thrive in times of terrorism?

Should human rights thrive in times of terrorism? PLONB
Every healthy democratic state prides itself on its human rights record and its will- ingness to uphold principles of equality, human dignity, liberty and due process. These principles are invariably contained in domestic law and form part of the state’s international obligations, and a breach of them gives rise to possible breaches of the law and national and international criticism. However, these rights cannot be enjoyed absolutely and in times of emergency they may need to be compromised for the sake of the state and the rights of its citizens. Events such as 9/11 and the bombings in London in 2005 have resulted in the passing of a number of legislative provisions which were intended to restrict indi- vidual liberty and human rights in the name of public safety and national security. Recently, for example, legislation has been rejected extending the period of police questioning of those suspected of terrorist offences to 42 days. This begs the ques- tion whether the enjoyment of human rights can survive emergency situations such as the imminent threat of terrorism and whether those suspected or found guilty of acts of terrorism should be able to rely on human rights law. International law provides some guidance in this respect, accepting that states may further restrict some human rights during times of war and other public emergency, and stating clearly that such measures cannot infringe on the most fundamental rights such as the right to life and freedom from torture. In other cases, however, the exceptional measures must be reasonable and proportionate; but who decides where the balance lies between protecting basic rights and safeguarding national security and public safety? Although basic notions of civilised society should not be abused even in times of emergency, it should be accepted that for a true democracy to survive in the face of terrorist threats extra measures need to be taken which invariably impact on per- sonal freedom and normally accepted ideas of justice. Thus, although it can never be acceptable to torture a suspected, or indeed convicted, terrorist, that individual’s ✓ ➔ M02_FOST0405_04_SE_C02. indd 25 25/01/16 4: 28 pm 26 Part 1 · Preparing and writing law assignments Example Assume that the student is answering the question, ‘ What are the essential features of the British Constitution? ’ An unstructured answer might look something like this: ‘The British Constitution is unwritten, but most other constitutions are written in a formal document. Some constitutions are rigid and cannot be changed except without a special proce- dure. This is not true of the British Constitution, which is flexible. The sources of the British Constitution are both legal and nonlegal and consist of statutes, case law and constitutional conventions. Parliament is regarded as sovereign and can pass what- ever law it wants. The British Constitution has no formal bill of rights, and Parliament can pass what- ever law it chooses. A central feature of the British Constitution is democracy and the House of Commons is elected. Other features are the rule of law and the separation of powers. ’ ✗ right to liberty of the person or a fair trial will need to be compromised when the special dangers posed by the terrorist threat require giving state authorities extra powers of questioning, or where the traditional rules of a fair trial (such as the gathering and disclosure of relevant evidence) would not be appropriate and would greatly injure the general public interest. Equally, during such times it should be accepted that the balance must be achieved by democratically elected and accountable government, and not, ultimately, by judges applying abstract and inflexible principles of justice. Thus, human rights law accepts that basic rights must be compromised during these times and, subject to evidence of clear abuse of power, judges should leave the balancing exercise to the laws of Parliament and the judgment of accountable government officers. In conclusion, basic human rights should survive in times of terrorism, but they should not thrive to the detriment of the greater public good in securing public safety, or obstruct government’s bona fide efforts to protect its territory and its citizens.
Every healthy democratic
state
prides itself on its
human
rights
record and its will-

ingness
to uphold principles of equality,
human
dignity, liberty and due process.

These principles are
invariably
contained in domestic
law
and form part of the

state’s international obligations, and a breach of them gives rise to possible breaches

of the
law
and national and international criticism.
However
, these
rights
cannot
be enjoyed
absolutely
and in
times
of emergency they may need to
be compromised
for

the sake of the
state
and the
rights
of its citizens.

Events
such as 9/11 and the bombings in London in 2005 have resulted in the

passing
of a number of legislative provisions which
were intended
to restrict
indi
-

vidual
liberty and
human
rights
in the name of
public
safety and national security.

Recently,
for example
, legislation has
been rejected
extending the period of police

questioning
of those suspected of
terrorist
offences
to 42 days. This begs the ques
- tion
whether the enjoyment of
human
rights
can survive emergency situations
such


as
the imminent threat of terrorism and whether those suspected or found guilty of

acts of terrorism should be able to rely on
human
rights
law.

International
law
provides
some
guidance in this respect, accepting that
states
may

further
restrict
some
human
rights
during
times
of war and
other
public
emergency,

and stating
clearly
that such measures cannot infringe on the most fundamental

rights such as the
right
to life and freedom from torture. In
other
cases,
however
, the

exceptional measures
must
be reasonable and proportionate;
but
who decides where

the balance lies between protecting
basic
rights
and safeguarding national security

and
public
safety?

Although
basic
notions of
civilised
society should not
be abused
even in
times
of

emergency, it should be
accepted
that for a true democracy to survive in the face

of
terrorist
threats extra measures need to
be taken
which
invariably
impact on per-

sonal
freedom and
normally
accepted
ideas
of justice.
Thus
, although it can never

be acceptable to torture a suspected, or
indeed
convicted,
terrorist
, that individual’s





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26 Part 1 · Preparing and writing
law
assignments

Example

Assume
that the student is answering the question, ‘ What are the essential features of the

British
Constitution
? ’ An unstructured answer might look something like this:

‘The British
Constitution
is unwritten,
but
most
other
constitutions
are written
in a

formal document.

Some
constitutions
are rigid and cannot be
changed
except without a special
proce
-

dure
. This is not true of the British
Constitution
, which is flexible. The sources of
the


British
Constitution
are both legal and nonlegal and consist of statutes, case
law
and

constitutional
conventions. Parliament
is regarded
as sovereign and can pass what-

ever
law
it wants.

The British
Constitution
has no formal bill of
rights
, and Parliament can pass what-

ever
law
it chooses. A central feature of the British
Constitution
is democracy and
the


House
of Commons
is elected
.
Other
features are the
rule
of
law
and the separation

of powers.
’ ✗ right
to liberty of the person or a
fair
trial will need to
be compromised
when the

special
dangers
posed by the
terrorist
threat require giving
state
authorities extra

powers of questioning, or where the traditional
rules
of a
fair
trial (such as the

gathering and disclosure of relevant evidence) would not be appropriate and would

greatly
injure the general
public
interest.

Equally
, during such
times
it should be
accepted
that the balance
must
be achieved


by
democratically
elected and accountable
government
, and not,
ultimately
, by

judges applying abstract and inflexible principles of justice.
Thus
,
human
rights
law

accepts that
basic
rights
must
be compromised
during these
times
and, subject to

evidence of
clear
abuse of power, judges should
leave
the balancing exercise to the

laws of Parliament and the judgment of accountable
government
officers.

In conclusion
,
basic
human
rights
should survive in
times
of terrorism,
but
they

should not thrive to the detriment of the greater
public
good in securing
public

safety, or obstruct
government
’s bona fide efforts to protect its territory and its

citizens.
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