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SHOULD EDUCATION AND HEALTH ARE BE FREE OF CHARGE AND FINISHED BY THE GOVERNMENT OR SHOULD BE THE RESPONSIBILITY OF THE PEOPLE TO PAY FOR THESE SERVICES ? DISCUSS THE ABOVE AND ABOVE AND GIVE YOUR OPINION USING EXAMPLE .

SHOULD EDUCATION AND HEALTH ARE BE FREE OF CHARGE AND FINISHED BY THE GOVERNMENT OR SHOULD BE THE RESPONSIBILITY OF THE PEOPLE TO PAY FOR THESE SERVICES? DISCUSS THE ABOVE AND ABOVE AND GIVE YOUR OPINION USING EXAMPLE. xWm9
NOBODY WOULD DISPUTE THE FACT THAT HEALTH AND EDUCATION IS THE KEY WHICH DEVELOP THE COUNTRY. MEANWHILE, THE GOVERNMENT PROVIDES THE FREE EDUCATION AND HEALTH FACILITIES PEOPLE GET MORE CARELESS HOWEVER, THE POPULACE DIVIDE IN GROUPS ACCORDING TO FINANCIAL CONDITION AND PROVIDE FACILITIES. THIS ESSAY DISCUSS BOTH ASPECTS IN SUBSEQUENT PARAGRAPHS. FROM THE FIRST STAND POINT, NUMBER OF FACILITIES RELATED TO HEALTH AND EDUCATION CREATED BY THE GOVERNMENT IN EVERY INDIVIDUAL COUNTRY. EVEN THOUGH, IT HAS DEVASTATING IMPACT ON ECONOMY OF COUNTRY. ON THE OTHER HAND, POPULATION WHO HAS THESE TYPE OF FACILITIES THEY SHOW THEIR LESS PROPENSITY TOWARD WORK. TO CITE AN EXAMPLE, IN 2012 THE SURVEY WAS CONDUCTED BY THE WORLD HEALTH ORGANISATION ON THE SCHEMES WHICH ARE CREATED BY THE GOVERNMENT AND THE FIRST ADVERSE IMPACT WAS THAT THE BECOME LAZY. AS A CONSEQUENCES, THESE TYPES OF SCHEMES DISTURB THE ECONOMY OF COUNTRY AS WELL AS ON THINK OF PEOPLE. FROM THE ANOTHER STAND POINT, GOVERNMENT SHOULD INIATE SOME PROACTIVE MEASURES TO DISTRIBUTE THE POPULATION OF NATION IN SUB PARTS ACCORDING TO FINANCIAL CONDITION OR THEIR WORK. BY DIVIDING POPULATION IN GROUP THE GOVERNMENT SHOULD IMPLEMENT THE SCHEMES ACCORDING TO THEIR NEED. FOR INSTANCE, IN INDIA THE NUMBER OF SCHEMES CREATED BY THE GOVERNMENT FOR PEOPLE WHO LIVE BELOW THE BREADLINE WHICH HELP THEM IN DIFFICULT SITUATION. AS A RESULT, THESE TYPE OF ACTIVITIES HELP THOSE WHO HAVE NEED AND IMPROVE THEIR STANDARD. TO SUM UP, IT BENEFICIAL TO CREATE NEW FACILITIES TO SUM EXTENT FOR NEEDY PEOPLE NOT FOR THOSE WHO HAVE NO NEED. AS FAR AS I CONCERNED, IN OUR COUNTRY THE HEALTH AND SCHEME CREAT BY GOVERNMENT FOR LABOURER THEY USE IT FOR SERIOUS PROBLEMS.
NOBODY WOULD DISPUTE THE FACT THAT
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HEALTH
AND EDUCATION IS THE KEY WHICH DEVELOP THE
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COUNTRY
. MEANWHILE, THE
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GOVERNMENT
PROVIDES THE FREE EDUCATION AND
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HEALTH
FACILITIES
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PEOPLE
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GET
MORE CARELESS
HOWEVER
, THE POPULACE DIVIDE IN GROUPS ACCORDING TO FINANCIAL CONDITION AND PROVIDE FACILITIES.
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THIS ESSAY DISCUSS
BOTH ASPECTS IN SUBSEQUENT PARAGRAPHS. FROM THE
FIRST
STAND POINT, NUMBER OF FACILITIES RELATED TO
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HEALTH
AND EDUCATION CREATED BY THE
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GOVERNMENT
IN EVERY INDIVIDUAL
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COUNTRY
.
EVEN THOUGH
, IT HAS DEVASTATING IMPACT ON ECONOMY OF
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COUNTRY
.
ON THE OTHER HAND
, POPULATION
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WHO
HAS THESE TYPE OF FACILITIES THEY
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SHOW
THEIR LESS PROPENSITY TOWARD WORK. TO CITE AN EXAMPLE, IN 2012 THE SURVEY
WAS CONDUCTED
BY THE WORLD
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HEALTH
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ORGANISATION
ON THE
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SCHEMES
WHICH
ARE CREATED
BY THE
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GOVERNMENT
AND THE
FIRST
ADVERSE IMPACT WAS THAT THE BECOME LAZY. AS A CONSEQUENCES, THESE TYPES OF
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SCHEMES
DISTURB THE ECONOMY OF
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COUNTRY
AS WELL
AS ON
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THINK
OF
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PEOPLE
. FROM THE ANOTHER STAND POINT,
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GOVERNMENT
SHOULD
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INIATE
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SOME
PROACTIVE MEASURES TO DISTRIBUTE THE POPULATION OF NATION IN SUB PARTS ACCORDING TO FINANCIAL CONDITION OR THEIR WORK. BY DIVIDING POPULATION IN GROUP THE
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GOVERNMENT
SHOULD IMPLEMENT THE
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SCHEMES
ACCORDING TO THEIR NEED.
FOR INSTANCE
, IN INDIA THE NUMBER OF
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SCHEMES
CREATED BY THE
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GOVERNMENT
FOR
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PEOPLE
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WHO
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LIVE
BELOW THE BREADLINE WHICH
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HELP
THEM IN DIFFICULT SITUATION.
AS A RESULT
, THESE TYPE OF ACTIVITIES
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HELP
THOSE
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WHO
HAVE NEED AND
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IMPROVE
THEIR STANDARD. TO SUM UP, IT BENEFICIAL TO CREATE NEW FACILITIES TO SUM EXTENT FOR NEEDY
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PEOPLE
NOT FOR THOSE
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WHO
HAVE NO NEED. AS FAR AS I CONCERNED, IN OUR
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COUNTRY
THE
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HEALTH
AND
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SCHEME
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CREAT
BY
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GOVERNMENT
FOR
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LABOURER
THEY
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USE
IT FOR SERIOUS PROBLEMS.
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IELTS essay SHOULD EDUCATION AND HEALTH ARE BE FREE OF CHARGE AND FINISHED BY THE GOVERNMENT OR SHOULD BE THE RESPONSIBILITY OF THE PEOPLE TO PAY FOR THESE SERVICES? DISCUSS THE ABOVE AND ABOVE AND GIVE YOUR OPINION USING EXAMPLE.

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