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Should children drive a car without permission

Should children drive a car without permission jjNM
Nowadays many children are interested in driving. So, just like that, it's becoming their hobby but of course, children can not drive without permission. No, I do not agree with that because it causes a lot of accidents and disasters The reason is that there are a lot of traffic jams on the roads nowadays what do you think is the reason for this? Of course, when teenagers are driving without following the rules of the road that is accidental injuries, and of course scientist cases are observed through violations because they drive without a driver's license People who want to get a permit for driving a car should get a minimum of 18 years old. Because of this age is normal for driving. Of course, there is a good side to this. Many people now use their cars, which helps us to save time, but also to bring a distant place closer. In conclusion, from my point of view, people always should pay attention to all traffic regulations.
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, children can not drive without permission.

No, I do not
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accidents and disasters The reason is that there are
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traffic jams on the roads nowadays

what do you
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is the reason for this?

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scientist cases
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a minimum of 18 years
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age is normal for driving.

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, from my point of view,
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always should pay attention to all traffic regulations.
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IELTS essay Should children drive a car without permission

Essay
  American English
5 paragraphs
169 words
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5.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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Lexical Resource: 6.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 7.0
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